Just so you know. I love the way Sesshoumaru is speaking. You got that down to a tee from the manga and anime! I'm only on the second chapter but so far I love it!

The cat youkai is being strange, I wonder if it is Hojo. I mean, Hojo has been in contact with Buyo the cat. Great chapter!

COOL! the green nekoyoukai's involved now. Sesshomaru's so going to kill it

OMG! Fantastic chapter! I loved it! I am soooo looking forward to the next one!

gasps! omg! is it another naraku plot with byakuya disguised as sesshomaru?!? updates! i need to read the updates!!!  Nice chapter :DD

I can only say one thing. Wow! What a great chapter. The battle was perfect military strategy and tactics. Sun Tzu would be proud.

A murder on the shrine grounds!  Jinkies, Scooby!  I bet it's more than just modern era violence...  I wonder if this will get in the way of Sesshomaru and Kagome mating...

I loooooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee  ittttttttttttttttttttttt !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i haven't read a real good fanfiction for a damn long time, and gosh this is one great fanfiction !

I love it just way tooo much !

You're the best advi-sama !

by chap 28, i love the chatbox most :

Advi: Ooh…I can’t wait for the next chappie!

Inuyasha: You’re the author…you already know what’s going to happen…

Advi: Yeah…but I still can’t wait for it…My first big battle…

Inuyasha: So what?

Advi: Inuyasha…you’re supposed to be happy as well, since you’re actually going to do a lot of fighting.

Inuyasha: You…mean…I finally get to fight for real?

Advi: Uh huh

Inuyasha: YES! I FINALLY GET TO KICK SESSHOUMARU’S ASS!

Advi: Noooo….you finally get to kick hog ass! (stares at Inuyasha)

Inuyasha: err…yeah…hog ass…ya-hoo

you should have let sesshoumaru-sama stare at him too !

loved it! please update soon!

Hey Advi,

This is a totally awesome story so far. but you put this chappie up twice on the one page.

other than that. I LOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!

no seriously this is a great story keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^

Hojo was an ass.  I am thinking something isn't right about Hojo. Great chapter!

Great Story!  I read it once on fanfiction.net and really enjoyed it.  I was quite saddened to see it go.  Your story was one of the few that I could read over and over again. 

who ever sent you that hate mail is an imbicile not only are your stories great but this site is sesshoumaru+kagome really what the hell were they doing anyways keep up the great work dont let as* holes get to you ^_^

I am really enjoying this story. At first i thought it was similar to many of those that i've read but i'm seeing the difference now. I like it. I can't wait for Sesshoumaru and Kagome to finally be together ^_^, lol. I did notice that with the coin issue, there is the opening for a side story or a side plot or something so i hope that you develop it or at least close off the thought eventually. If it's one thing i dislike is for an author to open a thought and leave it hanging. Soo, great job thus far, I definately look forward to the next chaper...until then.

Keeo on writing and i'll keep on reading

MUA (Most Unlikely Angel) 0:)

loved it! please update soon!

loved it! what does 'ana-ta' mean? please update soon!

I like what you updated so far, but there's a couple of things that I've noticed. In chapter 17, when Sesshomaru introduced Kagome as his mate to Baron Nobuhiro and Saya, I think you meant to write "YOU CHOOSE A HUMAN OVER ME?!" instead of "...ME OVER A HUMAN?!". I've also noticed the same thing where Kikyou is confronted by Inuyasha and at one point says, "Then you have finally chosen me over my reincarnation?", when it should be, "Then you have finally chosen my reincarnation over me?". It's very good overall and I look forward to the next chapter (I actually read all 23 chapters, btw).