Dearest Advi,

I had read this story on FanFiction.net awhile back and loved it I was so happy to see that you were posting it here. I don't review often although I know to authors reviews can be food in a way I find for myself at least that trite words are not something I find myself easily saying anymore these days.

I digress though, I decided to post here to remind you that there are often those like myself that do not review but that does not make your work anything less then enjoyable to read and I look forward to each of your posts as I look forward to each of the stories that are posted here and the several other sites I go to read.

You have a wonderful imagination and I am happy to get to take a small peak into it through your story.

As for the inevitable "flamers" that all I am sure have dealt with at one time or another simply remember these words..."it is mind over matter, You don't mind, because in the end They don't matter."

If you are happy with what you write and you feel and grow with each writing then that is all that matters.

Take Care Advi and Happy Writing,

Lady Lillian

Hello to you. First off; let me say that even though i have not reviewed your story before, I have read each and every chapter and anxiously awaited the next one. i am just incomfortable writing reviews because I feel I sound like such a complete wank when I do; which is quite sad reslly, for there are many fics I enjoy and follow almost religiously...this fic is one of them. I enjoy how you update every day, it is so thrilling to wake up the next morning and have another installment to read over coffee. Usually I get so frustrated when a chapter ends just when it is getting good, mainly because I hate to wait to see how it turns out, but in your case I did not mind it much for i knew as the sun rises another chapter would rise with it!

Now, while your P O V 's can be a bit confusing at times [ only in the first couple chapters, mind you], I still find this story enthralling  and I must say it has become a bit less confusing as the chapters progressed. I see this as maybe you were nervous about writing and posting it; from what I read in the flame, it is completely understandable too. hOwever, as you progressed, you became more relaxed and confident which was utterly divine for the story unfolded rather nicely from there. BRAVO TO YOU!!! Ususally when I find too many spelling errors or action that shifts too fast I stop reading and move on; how glad I am I did not do this in this case. As I said, your writing has improved with each chapter and I am sooo enjoying this fic; i am sure you will continue to grow as an author with each and every word you write. you do have skills my friend.

As far as the flame goes, do not let it get to you my dear. I read the review in question and i must say that I was shocked and appalled, plus a whole plethora of other emotions we shall not get into. No one wants to delve into the workings of my mind; it is a risky endeavor to say the least. Anyway; there will always be those who criticize your work for whatever their reasons and you must ignore them. I know it can be hard as creativity and sensitivity go hand in  hnad; however, to write and post it on the net for all to read is opening ones self up for criticism as well as praise. We all love it when we get rave reviews; they make us feel good and stroke that ego in ways nothing else can. They tend to make up for the occasional less than polite reviews some may take pleasure in leaving in the hopes of crushing the author's self-esteem. Do not let this happen to you; you do have talent no matter what flamers might say.

The plot you have developed here is wonderful; which is what drew me in in the first place. As far as Kagome's character goes; she is a nice an sweet person until osmeone brings the bitch out in her. that is something that some tend to forget. Therefore, do not think on what was said in reference to how you portrayed her, for you did just fine. I look forward to reading this fic to its completion so please, dear authoress...write on!! 

Respects to You and Your Skills;

Oroyukae  

Your story is great and dont let any type of idiot to tell you otherwise.

PS: Ask admins to remove that moronic review

yayayaya its done they are mate and can go back and kick kikhoe and narku butt. WOOOOOOOO Thanks for the update.

ho~ inuyasha AND sesshomaru in the modern times TOGETHER. nice chapter :DDD  seriously dense hojo. haha.

Great chapter! What was the bright golden glow over her stomach? Can't wait to know about that, but, with Inuyasha there, won't there still be problems with the mating?

Thank you so much, Wow not having my computer for a week or two i finally caught up and can't wait for  the next chapter. Thanks

I just came across this story the other day, I have to say this is now my new favorite. 

I check each morning for updates and am always excited to find a new chapter. Thank You!!!

loved it! when kagome saw that glow around her stomach, does that mean she is going to have a baby? please update soon!

nice chap! liked the insert of slight humour with totosai. haha :D

Too funny!!!

Favorited! I just read this story from the first chapter to here on and off all day~ lol. This fic is GREAT! I love how you write Sesshoumaru. It's exactly as I would expect him to talk in the manga! I can't get enough of this. And that lemon... omg. Not even a cold shower is going to help me now >.> haha. I can't wait for them to defeat Naraku, it's gonna be epic. Thanks so much for writing this and sharing it! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Of course the current Lady is still the Lady of 500 years ago. Lady Kagome-sama... Obvious!! But I do believe when Detective-san was digging a bit too deep she was getting snippy... hey even 500+ year old royalty can get frusterated... just look at Sesshoumaru... wonderful guy but still loses control....

Altogether a wonderful story...

hohoho. is the ladyship kagome? :DDDD can't wait to read more~

*in a sing-song* I know who she is. I know who she is. But I'm not telling. Nani nani poo poo. *end sing-song* At least there are productinve endings for at least three people so far. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

loved it! is it Kagome? please update soon!

Advi-sensei, this is a truly wonderful story but i would like to know... what is your pen name? I would like to read one of your books...  the characters sound intriguing... also what is the name of your book? It sounds wonderful.  Arigatou Advi-sensei I love your work.

loved it! please update soon! i really want to know what happens next.

umm..i'm not critisising or anything, but...

FYI you forgot to warn us about the lime thing advi..

loved it! please update soon!