Thanks for the update can't wait to find out what gonna happen next.
Very good story Advi,unique and engaging. You are a very talented writer. I have a suggestion which may help your writing style, which is a little chopppy: select one POV and don't switch around. Either write it from an omnicient person's or one of the character's POV and don't switch. Switching around too much makes it feel very choppy and does not move the story forward: your character's actions move the story forward. May I suggest you try doing a chapter from only Kagome's POV and reveal information as she observes and interacts with the other characters? Good luck and please update soon!
jackie_loves_sesshomaru (Chapter 1) - Sun 30 May 2010
i love this story ass well but i was wish to if you were to finish kagome, lady of the west because the way inuyasha felt and kagome as well hope the pdate comes soon for both!
Ink (Chapter 8) - Sun 30 May 2010
I really like your story! I hope your next chapter up soon!
very single chapter is awesome* XD
I luv it ^^
Please, update soon!! ;D
I love it!! Please update as soon as you can. ^^
I have a question: Kikyo steals reiyouku from Kagome when Kagome is being protected, and not fighting/training?
Ilea (Chapter 1) - Sat 29 May 2010
I love this story, thank you soo much for putting it bakc up ^_^
ooh this is really good, please update soon i wanna see want inuyasha says about sesshomaur's new arm
Beatriz (Chapter 5) - Thu 27 May 2010
I love your story, please continue soon!!!
I love that part!
martha (Chapter 5) - Thu 27 May 2010
I must say I am hooked on your story and will check on it for updates/ Thanks for sharing
martha (Chapter 2) - Thu 27 May 2010
I found a website that has Inuyasha the final act which i believe picks up where the last one leaves off. However it is only subbed so I haven't watch any of it yet. If you email i can send you the site. It has lots of Anime for free watching.
Please, hurry and post more! I love this story...
Taisho (Chapter 1) - Tue 25 May 2010
Is that why you take out this story in Fanfiction because you revamp the story? Looks like the story line is different than the older version. When Sesshoumaru finally let go his obsession with Tessaiga, is Sesshoumaru also going to get Bakusaiga and heal his left arm all on his own just like anime and manga, and without Kagome assistance in healing his missing arm in this story?
Do you know that they finally put the last volume of Inuyasha manga into 'Inuyasha: the Final Act' anime.
Good story so far. I like where it's going. The only thing that bothers me is that it gets kinda jumpy. It sometimes takes a moment to figure out who's talking.
As for where the show ends... Hulu.com is your friend for watching Inuyasha: the Final Act. You may not want to watch it until your story is over though. This way you can compare your vision with Rumiko Takahashi's vision.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Tsuki (Chapter 1) - Mon 24 May 2010
Inuyasha is soooo stupid!!! LOL But this is really interesting so far :) I likes it!!! Keep up the awesome work :D
This is one of my all-time favorite stories! I'm so glad to see it back! I will never forget the imagery when Kagome is falling from the sky and Sesshy swoops down and catches her... That was one of the best fanfic passages I have ever read!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I READ THIS ON FF.NET AND I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! AND NOW IT'S HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SUPER YAY!
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