Thanks for the update I really enjoyed it the monk so funny.
Nice chapter so far. Saya has absolutely no idea who she's messing with, the little skank. But at least they found a way to break Kikyou's reiyoku-stealing spell on INuyasha. As for Kikyou, she needs to get what's coming to her. Can't wait for the next chapter.
You ended this on ff.net? I had no idea, but it doesn't matter. I'm glad you're posting it here. I love this chapter, with everyone knowing now that that bitch Kikyou is using Inuyasha as the conduit for Kagome's powers. But Sesshomaru is right though. He can't keep Kagome away from Inuyasha forever. I wonder what Inuyasha will do now that he knows what an evil, selfish bitch Kikyou is. I hope she gets hers somewhere down the line. I want to know if Kikyou knows that everyone knows her scheme. Can't wait to see that reaction. Can't wait for the next chapter.
martha (Chapter 16) - Mon 07 Jun 2010
Thank you for the update. Things are getting interesting.
The only thing I don't like about the chapter is that it was TOO SHORT! Other than that, the action in this one was very good and well thought out. I hope in the next chapter that Miroku confirms to everyone that Inuyasha being near Kagome is bad news in that he's unknowingly being used by that dead bitch Kikyou as a conduit for Kagome's powers. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I am in love with your story! Thank you so much! I cannot wait for the next one!!!!!
martha (Chapter 15) - Sun 06 Jun 2010
Thanks for the update it just getting good. Wonder how long before they realize what kikhoe doing
REDWOLF (Chapter 15) - Sun 06 Jun 2010
I was hoping Miroku would tell that Kikyo was using Inuyasha to steal Kagome's powers. I can't wait to read her reaction. great chapter!
Tashio (Chapter 15) - Sun 06 Jun 2010
Is Sesshoumaru finally going to get Bakusaiga, his very own sword, and the one that is forged from his own body and has the power to annihilating thousands of demons with one strike?
Till next time.
Great chapter! Do me a favor? The next time some bozo flames you.......tell them to get bent. Think of only two things. Do YOU like how your story is going? Do you have dedicated readers staying by you? *raises hand*
I really admire the idea you have come up with, that Kikyo is using InuYasha as a conduit to drain off Kagome's powers and use them for herself. That's brilliant! Another excellent chapter.
Vanja (Chapter 14) - Sat 05 Jun 2010
Well, this fanfic went from a decent one to a really bad one. I actualy was unable to read the 14 chapter to the end.
I dislike how you jump from one POV to another - it is anoying that readers have to read about the same situation, sentence twice! It's unprofesional and it makes me feel like I am an Idiot who needs to hear things twice to understand them.... But this I could survive and go on but for no reason you started to rush things. Sesshoumaru asks Kagome to mate him? Where did that come from? It's too fast and there is no experiences to back up developing of their feelings.
I wrote this review because I believe that you have got what it takes to be a good fanfic writer. I hope that it will get better.
For any mispeling I apologise but English is my second language.
Good luck
REDWOLF (Chapter 14) - Sat 05 Jun 2010
WOE....Does Inuyasha not understand that his mother took him away from the castle when his father died? I can't wait for the next chapter, this is such an interesting fic. I really am enjoying it :)
Wow, that was a great chapter. I can't wait to see Inuyasha's reaction will be when he notice's Kagome's claim mark. I also love the fact that you are writing it from both of their point of views. Update soon please.
martha (Chapter 14) - Sat 05 Jun 2010
Ya ya they are gonna get mated. WOOOOO nice castle I had to look it up to see it. Thanks for update
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 14) - Sat 05 Jun 2010
I'm glad that you're feeling better. if some nutter does hatemail against your story again let us know and we'll give you hugs and want to kick the nutter's butt. >^.^<
loved the new chappie. oh man is Yasha gonna be ticked. I hope that Shippo will stay with Kagome and Rin....man is that little boy gonna be hurt that Rin started calling Kagome 'mommy' outloud before he did. poor thing
btw, I also like your other story Kagome Lady of the West so I'm waiting for an update for that too....man Kagome will need some counseling I bet....and won't be happy with Sesshomaru needing to repair the family's honor...well...that's what I'm thinking is gonna happen....am I right?
pussinboots (Chapter 13) - Sat 05 Jun 2010
This is a great story so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
How can you get hate mail for this story?! It's so great! It just goes to show that some people are plain stupid and downright mean. Seriously, how can someone read a story with a pairing and then say they don't like the pairing? Don't waste your time on such idiotic people.
Anyways, I just want to tell you that I really enjoy reading this fic! I like your writing style, it's so unique. And I like how you portrayed Sesshoumaru and Kagome! Keep up the awesome work!
See ya!
Seggoge (Chapter 13) - Fri 04 Jun 2010
Hi, i've been reading your fanfic for a while now and Abolotly love it cant see any reasen why someone would give u hate mail for it unless their complet morones. I mean that. and i think this was a random act to aperson that doesnt like Sess+ Kagome on this site is just a flame or hate mail waiting to happen.
Hope you feel better soon and remeber their morones kk :3
Seggoge
This story is really good..I don't know why someone would send you hate mail...probably just jealous of your writing style ^-^
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