Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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knifethrower (Chapter 54) - Tue 15 Jun 2010

I LOVE this version of Sesshomaru!  I see why the title of this fic is "Unspoiled".  Sesshomaru before going through...  all that.


GreyEcho (Chapter 53) - Sun 13 Jun 2010

clever and well thought on Kagome's part. :D

 

the little dragon was cute! XD


Yohko (Chapter 53) - Sat 12 Jun 2010

So that's what happened. ^^ NICE!


loveyaa (Chapter 53) - Sat 12 Jun 2010

I quite enjoyed the tie in. I like when there are different stories but they all come together in the end and are connected somehow. I can't wait for the real coming together and what the reunion between them all will be like. Til next time where maybe we find once again learn from the teacher (what happened) :)


SilverontheRose (Chapter 53) - Fri 11 Jun 2010

You are a sneaky and right cunning lady.  I find myself rereading this story often to pick up the newest threads you string.  The layers of meaning you evidence throughout are astonishing.  I think I know why Higurashi had to leave so fast, but I'll not say here.  *mischievous grin*  How 'bout a pm that I know you'll be coy about?

*hugs a darling friend*


Tilayha (Chapter 53) - Fri 11 Jun 2010

So sneaky you are. Getting Sesshoumaru to protect a half brother he knows nothing about yet. Very good chapter!!

 

Tilayha


Lauren (Chapter 53) - Fri 11 Jun 2010

*dies* The adorable-ness is killing me. I love it! I can imagne how insanely cute the hatchlings are. I just want to mush them! But this chapter makes me wonder where the three of them are. *worries* I hope they're all right and are still in the caves. Or a cave. ...Ryukotsusei didn't get his hands on them, did he??

And of course, Sesshomaru kept his word. Because he loves her and he's such an honorable puppy~ I love how children are with promises. That jealousy bit, by the way... priceless.

Another great chapter - You know, if you couldn't tell.

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


Samantha (Chapter 53) - Fri 11 Jun 2010

Oh boy!  That was a good one!  I love this story I know you probably get bored of me saying the same thing but what else can I say?  You are a fantastic writer with such an unbelievable imagination!  Please update soon!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 53) - Fri 11 Jun 2010

i love this! kagome's always so sneaky! _ _ _♥


cbrendible (Chapter 53) - Fri 11 Jun 2010

ooh these things need to come faster... everytime i open my computer to check my email these are the first stories i look for if it's been updated. i love these things!!!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 53) - Fri 11 Jun 2010

Forthy, when was the last time I proclaimed your brilliance? You are a masterful storyteller... you are blessed with the gift of a magic tongue and the amazing ability to translate that to the written word. I am so enchanted with each chapter of this story, and this chapter is the most enchanting of all, I have the picture of Kagome with the little black hatching cuddled in her lap while surrounded by the jealous heads of his older brothers... And Kagome asleep beside the young Sesshoumaru; not yet a woman, but no long a child. And he a young pup who still knows his mind. You engender the wonder I felt when listening to fairytales when I was a child.


KEdakumi (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Jun 2010

This is one of my favorite stories.  I think I need to go back and reread it again, from the beginning.  It's so well written, I can't wait for the next chapter.  Thank you for giving us a different view of Lord Fuzzy. :)


Darrakk (Chapter 53) - Fri 11 Jun 2010

Kagome sure is a sneaky bitch, in the nicest way possible.


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 52) - Mon 07 Jun 2010

Oh this is so wonderful ^_^  I was reading this on Fanfiction and I hadn't realised you had written so much more.  I was just re-reading in on Dokuga because I like the story so much, and found myself reading about 20 new chapters.  It was a very pleasant surprise.  I love this story.  I really do.  Sesshoumaru is just so sweet as a child, but he's still so much himself.  I really have nothing to critique at all.  I love the characters, the story and not to mention the mystery.  I'm wracking my brains trying to figure out what the heck happens to Kagome and Hisoka o.O  There are so many possibilities.  I can't wait to find out what happened...but to that point I'm also in no hurry for the story to end, hehe ^_^.  I love it, I can't wait for more chapters.  Keep up the good work!


LM Bluejay (Chapter 52) - Mon 07 Jun 2010

Aaaaawwww, lil Sesshy-kun is a snuggler!!!! That is too cute! ^_^


FourShotChild (Chapter 52) - Sun 06 Jun 2010

I continue to be in awe over this story. I eagerly await any new chapters. It does make me happy to see the drabbles are a tad longer! I'm always leaving wanting more! I cannot wait for your next chapter! Thanks! And until then!


FoxyLadyKnight (Chapter 52) - Sun 06 Jun 2010

Ohhh this chapter was good, please hurry with the next update. I so love Sesshoumaru in this chapter. He is so adorable and cute. Hurry!


Lauren (Chapter 52) - Sat 05 Jun 2010

Another supremely sweet chapter. I cannot get over how adorable these are. They make me so hayaaaan. ^^ It's going to be that much harder once Kagome leaves. *anxious* I do wonder if you'll include the three new dragons later on in the story though. Here's hoping these chapters will continue for a little while longer.

Congrats on your other awards!

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


miki (Chapter 52) - Sat 05 Jun 2010

as good as always, you really deserve the first place


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 52) - Sat 05 Jun 2010

Awe I loved this chapter hehe!  I do hope that Kagome will be sleeping (non-perv) with young Sesshomaru-kun more :) it is simply KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe :) update again really soon this story makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside and I love it :) TY for this wonderful piece of work it truly is a master piece :) so update again soon I simply can not wait to read more of this fic


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