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Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Margie (Chapter 63) - Fri 23 Jul 2010

Beautifully written. I can't wait for more! :)


Rowdys girl (Chapter 63) - Fri 23 Jul 2010

WAH!!!!! Forthy... I'm speechless with awe. *bows* You have bested yourself with this one chapter. I truly think this is the best I have ever read from you. The fight - the emotions were so raw, so young, the child within striking out... You leave me shaken and shaking.


Renee Mannings (Chapter 63) - Fri 23 Jul 2010

I love it I love it I LOVE IT!!!


Eve (Chapter 63) - Fri 23 Jul 2010

OMG - SSSooooooo Good!

 

I can hardly wait for the next chapter!!!!!

 

Love it!!!

 

 


Samantha (Chapter 63) - Fri 23 Jul 2010

****Spechless****  This story had me holding my breath!!!!!  I was just so excited I was on the edge of my seat and I don't mean that as an expresssion I was literally on the edge of my seat!!!  Please Please Please update soon you are such a great writer I just can't wait for the next chapter!  I am going to be soooooo restless today!  This story is hitting such a high climax I am breathless from the lack of oxygen from the high altitude!!!!!  LOL mini joke!  Thanks so much!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 63) - Fri 23 Jul 2010

you always paint such wonderful stories. i like this!


17th Floor (Chapter 63) - Fri 23 Jul 2010

That made me tear up at the end! Great installment. Great descriptions of the Kitsure examinees, not a word out of place!


Sesshyluvr (Chapter 62) - Fri 23 Jul 2010

Please continue this story!!! I love it. It is definitely my favorite fanfic by far. I can't wait until it's finished!! You are a very talented writer and you have the personalities of each character perfect. I do hope that there is going to be a romance between sess and kag. I love the pairing.  


Hesunohana (Chapter 62) - Wed 21 Jul 2010

well, long time no see ! I had forgotten how gret "Unspoiled" is. and I was very occupied too !! (sigh)

 

well, I'm happy to be here again. I totally love what I just read. The old dragoon is so grightening and Inu no Taisho who doesn't know anything about his wichedness... so frustrating !

but the swimming lessons were so "cool" (laugh) just bravo !

 

see you soon !


loveyaa (Chapter 62) - Wed 21 Jul 2010

And another piece of the puzzle has fallen into place. I think it says a lot that older Sesshoumaru doesn't want to rush the time he had with her as a child. She had quite the impact on him (with things as small as hide and seek, and seek the button). Its interesting to see how Kagome is still effecting him. well til next time when we find out who we will be following :)


animejunky78 (Chapter 62) - Tue 20 Jul 2010

This is so awesome.  I can just see the pensive look on Sesshoumaru's face right now, and I can totally visualize him sitting on the porch with his hand draped over his knee.  You are such a fantastic writer.  I look forward to the next installment with great anticipation.  Keep up the great work.


Raeah (Chapter 62) - Sun 18 Jul 2010
I really liked the story even though i was hesitant to read at first. Please finish?

Discord-Maru (Chapter 62) - Sun 18 Jul 2010

I am enjoying this story so much. It is truly original. I am eagerly awating for more. Thank you for the great read.


Lauren (Chapter 62) - Sat 17 Jul 2010

Hazzah, your past few chapters have been very informative! I'm loving the clarity you're bringing to the story. I'm even more glad that we have a season (though I don't want these adorable Kag/koinu Sessho scenes to end). I'd almost forgotten that Jaken and th kids were with Sesshomaru, Inuyasha and Miroku. Thanks for mentioning them. *Guesses that Sango was in the room, setting things up* I feel like things are going to start coming to head soon. Now we just have to check back up on Hisoka-sensei and his little assistant in the future. The assistant whom I've become more and more certain as we progress is a kitsune (I was leaning towards Shippo in the beginning/when you first introduced him, but that seemed too easy).

Ah, the theories I have...

Thanks for the speedy updates!
~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


Samantha (Chapter 62) - Sat 17 Jul 2010

OOOOOOooooooohhhhh! I can't wait this story is starting to come together!  I just can't wait!  You are such a fantastic story teller I love this story I love this twist so unique and orginal PLEASE UPDATE SOON!  Thank you!


(Chapter 62) - Fri 16 Jul 2010

ooooo, this is by far one of the most intriguing stories here. I love the way you write, it just "hooks" you in hehe.


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 62) - Fri 16 Jul 2010

Awww.  Even adult Sesshoumaru is so sweet.  But it's hunky, deeply brooding, sexy sweet now, not adorable sweet, lol.  I also liked Inuyasha's gesture of fixing Rin's hat.  I love seeing his softer side ^_^  AND we got another morsel of information about kagome's disapearance.  A very nice little chapter.  Things are coming together.  Keep up the good work! 


Margie (Chapter 62) - Fri 16 Jul 2010

eeee another question answered! Love it! Can't wait for more!!


KEdakumi (Chapter 62) - Fri 16 Jul 2010

Awww... Sess is being more attentive to the group now that he's realized who his Higarashi is...  Can't wait for the next chapter.


Renee Mannings (Chapter 62) - Fri 16 Jul 2010

*cue music* dum dum duummmmm

And the plot thickens. 

 

 


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