Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Darrakk (Chapter 60) - Fri 09 Jul 2010

More please! Love this story, Keep it up!


fatcatmom (Chapter 60) - Fri 09 Jul 2010

Brilliant! Kagome's found her way home! Please update as soon as you are able to--this is a brilliant twist to the plot and quite an original thought about the origin and powers of the staff.

 


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 59) - Wed 07 Jul 2010

P.S

I forgot to mention how well done all the little games were.  Have her sneak up beneath him and tickle his feet and all the little strategies Seshoumaru used to get away or get her back.  It was very real and honest and so, so heartwarming ^_^

I also appreciate how Kagome respects his dignity and yet is still able to reach out and be close to him.  You've done a really good job of subtley building their relationship to a more intimate level and I admire how consistant you are with their characteristics and mannerisms.  They're growing, but they're still acting within the scope of their nature.  I really admire that about your writing. Anyways, I just wanted to add to my original post.  I re-read it and realized my greediness had over-ridden my compliments, hehe.  Thank you again.   


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 59) - Wed 07 Jul 2010

I think I was smiling during that whole chapter ^_^  I loved it.  If anything, I think it may have been nice to add some more description in the last paragraph.  Maybe add more about their expressions.  I'd really like to be able to picture the way his face looked, how sweet it was when he he actually let go and laughed.  Him and Kagome both.  I can add to it with my own imagination, but I'd like to see what you saw in your head during this scene.  It's not a critique, I'm just greedy and I really wanted to soak up such a rare moment, draw it out and really visualize it, hehe.  Anyways, thank you for the update, excellent as always.  Keep up the good work!   


shinkonokokoro (Chapter 59) - Tue 06 Jul 2010

Sorry--forgot to sign in. This previous comment was mine. :) I'm really loving your story. 


Anonymous (Chapter 59) - Tue 06 Jul 2010

Oh my... This latest chapter is just so darling! I love this cute, innocent, unspoiled Sesshoumaru that you've presented. :) Hisoka's reaction to Sesshoumaru laughing in earnest is rather heart-breaking, but I love all of what you've presented here. A beautiful interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. This is really lovely.


FoxyLadyKnight (Chapter 59) - Mon 05 Jul 2010

I so LOVED this chapter. I loved that Kagome could get Sesshoumaru to have fun, to actually laugh out loud. I could not stop smiling. Please hurry with the next chapter.


cbrendible (Chapter 59) - Sun 04 Jul 2010

FANTASTIC AND VERY CAPTIVATNG!!!


Rocks (Chapter 59) - Sun 04 Jul 2010

Dances happy dance! Oh this is sooo exciting I love the smiles and the whole out giggle. I just want to squeeze my pillow from sheer excitement. Thanks for the update. I just love this story!


Christina (Chapter 59) - Sun 04 Jul 2010

I absolutely love this story. It is my favorite out of all that I have ever read, and I do believe that I am addicted. Keep up the great work, can't wait to read another chapter!


momo (Chapter 59) - Sat 03 Jul 2010

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!

sesshou laugh....


Miss C (Chapter 59) - Sat 03 Jul 2010

Keep up the great work. I love how the story is developing. :)


GreyEcho (Chapter 59) - Sat 03 Jul 2010

I had been excitely awaiting this chapter, and it was beyond what I hoped for. ^_^ Little Sesshoumaru laughing and playing was really a sweet scene. I'm glad he broke out of his shell.


laenfante (Chapter 59) - Fri 02 Jul 2010

Just what I needed on a hot summer evening...the vision of young Sesshoumaru learning how to swim. It's sweet and tender and full of the gentle joy of youth. I have the warm fuzzies now.


Dragoness (Chapter 59) - Fri 02 Jul 2010

Wow, cute and so sweet. I am glad Sesshomaru was able to let his guard down for at least a little while.


Makuro767 (Chapter 59) - Fri 02 Jul 2010

The story is just too adorable, each tale have me squealing with delight. I mean, potraying Sess as a child figure isn't something that is done often. Now that slow ol' me have figure out the scanner, Imma draw him! Now... to post the artwork here... Can you give me tips?


jojo661538 (Chapter 58) - Fri 02 Jul 2010

i think this is the greatest story i have ever read i even re-read it just for fun keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^


Addy (Chapter 59) - Fri 02 Jul 2010

That's so cute~!!!!


janjan (Chapter 59) - Fri 02 Jul 2010

Awsome chapter definately one of my top ten favorites of this story!!keep going!


Margie (Chapter 59) - Fri 02 Jul 2010

So cute! Wonderful chapter :)


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