Reviews for Melancholy by Alon

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hana sora (Chapter 24) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Why he is forget her?? T_T


Chee (Chapter 24) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

This is one of the best written fanfic I've ever read. The first one I've reviewed because I do think it deserves the effort of leaving a review. This is also one of the most emotional stories. Lots of angst and drama. Sadly I can't stop reading it. It seems like every chapter the level of emotional 'turbulence' increases. Everytime I read each update, it leaves me with this heavy feeling in my chest, I feel really sad.( The title fits the content and I think Kagome's gonna end up dead, old and alone. )Then I'd  resort to reading light and fluffy oneshots just to forget about that 'emotional imprint'. Yep, you are one effective author....or I'm just being my usual psychotic self. Thanks for writing this story. (: 


Malayah (Chapter 24) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

I totally agree with ofelia largadas!! I am subscribed to this story so everytime there is an update I get an email.. I was so in love with this story in the beginning. Now it is so full of pain and stress at every single twist. Its kind of disappointing.


ofelia largadas (Chapter 24) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

i will be honest like the previous comments i had made with your stories...  i really felt iriitated as where this story is going , so many hurts and  twist this is becoming stressful already , waaaaa


Analy (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Nov 2015

Please update! I'm anxious for the next one!


mary (Chapter 23) - Mon 02 Nov 2015

Ewan


Blommie8 (Chapter 23) - Sun 01 Nov 2015

hana sora (Chapter 23) - Sun 01 Nov 2015

Yes sessh you idioy, ofcourse you've met kagome before. . Make him remember :(


Blommie8 (Chapter 22) - Sat 31 Oct 2015

Halcali (Chapter 22) - Fri 30 Oct 2015

Like I said, not everything is black and white. Kagome is pressured to make a decision where there is no time to ponder the repercussions, and with very limited choices, and not to mention Inuyasha breathing down her neck, so I don't exactly fault her for that. She's only human and she's flawed. She can't make the right decisions all the time, but she has an eternity to learn from the wrong decisions she made.

One thing I like about him losing his memory of Kagome is that this Sesshoumaru will no longer be a passive pushover. It's been too long since he let his father and Akemi dictate his life. I think this version of Sesshoumaru wouldn't take his father's or wife's bullshit, so here's hoping the two gets their comeuppance for manipulating and trapping him.

To be honest, I just wanted to shake them both. Kagome especially. Why waste time hurting each other when you can both be happy? But whatever. I still want them to end up together.

If I were given the choice, yes I would make the same decision. And when he wakes up, I'll spend the rest of my life to make him remember who I am.

Thanks for the update and Happy early Halloween!


Zyren (Chapter 22) - Fri 30 Oct 2015

Poor Kagome! Poor Sesshoumaru! His son likes Kagome though and everyone else remembers her. Surely someone will slip up and say something. His wife is still a bitch surely he'll realize that. 


Niomi (Chapter 22) - Fri 30 Oct 2015

Omg I'm gonna go ask my boyfriend that question !! I guess Kagome was being selfish.. But she had good intentions.  At the end of the day, you can't make decisions for people.. But I understand, most of us would probably make the same decision, her personality/thoughts/actions are no way out of the ordinary. Does it make her even with Sess? I don't know.. Kind of feels like it, she can't deny being with him after all this! 


BBG336 (Chapter 22) - Fri 30 Oct 2015

*hysterical laugh* shakes head*  I sit here wrestling with possible outcomes of how Sesshomaru and Kagome will get together.  Yet I find myself stumped because of everything you've thrown out here .. my mind is jumping from question to possible scenarios and back. What's going to happen with Sesshomaru's dad and wife ? Will Inuyasha tell him the truth ? Is there some kind of youkai spell to bring back memories? What does Kagome really want ? Why are you making me crazy? Lol , I'm sorry . Thank you for the update and I wait anxiously for the next chapter. 


Twizzlersevilbitch (Chapter 22) - Fri 30 Oct 2015

She tried calling him the day before she left his life, what was that all about?  I still hope they'll end up together, but I always want them to be together.  This story has me so engaged, I love it!  


Mona (Chapter 22) - Fri 30 Oct 2015

Revelations were sad because of the beginning of this chapter and happy because of the last part of this chapter.  I hooe you can get around to updating again soon.


Ree-san (Chapter 22) - Fri 30 Oct 2015

Unfortunately, this doesn't change my opinion of her.  I think in her argument with Inuyasha she was being honest.  She couldn't turn him away from having contact with her.  She didn't want to deal with it.  Her hesitance spoke hugely for her when asked if she would save him.  Now she's just rationalizing it.  It's rare for me to hope they don't get together in the end, but I hope he finds happiness without her.  I re-read the story and it strengthens my view actually.  I felt so bad for her and was so very angry with him.  But, now I think that she immediately ran and didn't fight for the relationship or try to see how trapped he was.  We all like to think that love easily conquers all but when you've devoted yourself to something always is it so easy to quickly walk away from everything for a love that wasn't truly committed yet?  It's not like she was already his mate.  But, there was no real fight for love.  Perhaps for once Kagome needs to be the one to try and win him over, if at all.  It would be even more sad if, again, he's the one to pursue her.  I'm not saying what he wanted was right or that his decision was right, but I'm saying she's not the helpless victim either.  There's examples of what he was willing to do and sacrifice for her, even if she wouldn't be with him in the end.  I think she saved him so she wouldn't feel like she let someone die, not because of her love for him.  Just my thoughts and ramblings on it.  I enjoy your writing style and look forward to your updates.  I'm very curious on where it ends up and how it gets there.


Niomi (Chapter 21) - Thu 29 Oct 2015

I couldnt have said it better than Ree-San!


Niomi (Chapter 21) - Thu 29 Oct 2015

Whaaaaaaat. I knew it was too easy and too good to be true ! hah. Oh god, cant wait to see how you get out of this one too!  I too , find your reviews entertaining lol!


Anonymous (Chapter 21) - Thu 29 Oct 2015

This is really sad. Why would she do something so dumb?

 

 


Adomani (Chapter 21) - Thu 29 Oct 2015

"OMG! 

 

You are full of pure evil! ...And I love it D:

I need more!!!!!"

 

sorry, that was me ):


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