Reviews for Melancholy by Alon

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Jennn (Chapter 28) - Sat 05 Dec 2015

I'm so glad you updated! great chapter!


hana sora (Chapter 28) - Sat 05 Dec 2015

Just need more!!


Jennn (Chapter 27) - Fri 20 Nov 2015

Please update (: I need more!!!!


Carolina (Chapter 27) - Tue 17 Nov 2015

Please update this soon ! It's so good ! I cant wait to read more ! lol :)


Blommie8 (Chapter 27) - Mon 16 Nov 2015

QueenOfTheDream (Chapter 27) - Sun 15 Nov 2015

I'm not gonna lie. I'm completely addicted to this story. The character development and plot progression are absolutely brilliant, and the tragic element is just tragic enough that it touches the heart without being too over the top. I can't wait for the next update! :D


Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Nov 2015

     OMG Sess...HURRY back and stop that evil Bitch that is your wife from hurting our dear Kags....

Please update soon!!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 27) - Sat 14 Nov 2015

Keep it coming.


Niomi (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Nov 2015

Thanks for the update! youve spoiled us with quick updates ;) but good to know things are coming together. I find it is easier to write angst and create problems than solve them haha. I can Feel Akumi s anger ... glad Kags stood up for herself. Cannot wait for whatever is going to happen next! You always like to leave us hanging. For now I'll just enjoy your drabble series.. It makes me equally as anxious... and its less than a quarter of what i get here! I don't know how you do it.


Mona (Chapter 27) - Sat 14 Nov 2015

I'm so happy to finally read this update.  hopefully more will come soon.


LadySesshoumaru_1 (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Nov 2015

You can't possibly know how happy Melancholy and Intertwined make me. I am forever on here just to look for updates. Keep up the great work, the stories draw you in and are brilliant.


Susy V (Chapter 27) - Sat 14 Nov 2015

I hope her beautiful mane of hair gets fried! 


hana sora (Chapter 27) - Sat 14 Nov 2015

This story needs update :) just asap please!


Jennn (Chapter 26) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Ah I love this!! Can't wait for an update (:


Niomi (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Nov 2015

Helllooooo. Feels like forever since I left something.  Wowza you got everyone all worked up! Personally I find it difficult to write after knowing everyone's opinion, I hope you don't find the need to please everyone! Do it at your own pace so that you maintain you're creativity. Anyhow, oh how Kagome is weeping from her actions. You did well in pushing all the anger from Sess to her! That made me laugh. I don't know how you're gonna fix them but I can't wait to see! 


Debra (Chapter 26) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

I don't think anything bad about Kagome denying her feelings for Sesshoumaru before since he was married. She needed to distance herself from him. She isn't some worthless whore, she deserved to be his wife and mate. He didn't chose her and she needed to move on. Everything he did bringing his son to spend time with her was wrong. If he wasn't happy he should have left the wife first. He also shouldn't blame Kagome for saving him. He has a son he should be thinking about. It says a lot about his mother when her own son misses his dad's ex. He's the one that chose her and had a son with her, so if she's lacking he needs to step up. He can't just die and leave his son alone with his wife and crazy father. No one should think bad about Kagome for her actions. Sesshoumaru put her in that position and she just had to make the best of it. If they never end up happy the only one I'd feel sorry for is Kagome for not being able to let go and move on. Sesshoumaru still has his son and business he's forming with Inuyasha he'll be fine. I worry Kagome may turn into a cat lady though. 


Blommie8 (Chapter 26) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

hana sora (Chapter 26) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

Yes more. . Sesshy must be remember damn!!


Jcdbunny (Chapter 26) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

fell in love with your version of kagome and sesshomaru so whenever their hearts break mine breaks :'( 


Strawberry (Chapter 26) - Sat 07 Nov 2015

Honestly sweetheart, I personally don't mind that she's a mess at this point in the story. Situations akin to this are messy

and there is no right way to feel. She made a selfless/selfish choice, but understandably so. Asking someone to not only 

let, but also watch the person they love die is an unreasonable request. And as for her not confessing her obvious feelings

before now, at this terribly inconvenient time, I see it as a scar that had nerve damage(sorry for the imagery). But it's a 

weakpoint for her and she doesn't willing want to touch it and feel the lingering pain, it's easier to pretend it's not there. Its 

like a breakup that just won't end; there's no closure, no healing point. There's just pain that she can either relive or stifle.

I really love this story, it's so sad in such a beautiful way. My only negative comment is that if he somehow falls for her a

second time, without his memories or any external intervention, it's going to feel like a cop-out..like a forced happy ending.

But other than that, everything is great <3

Update soon!


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