Maki's outgoing personality is really cool. I like how complex the situation is becoming between Maki, Hiro, Kagome and Sesshoumaru. It adds so many interesting curious questions as to how everything will play out. Great job!
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
Kyo (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
She should not go and that's FINAL! XD Now I tipped the scale slightly in the favor of NO so please No it should be. I agrre that it's not worth it to simply give up what you have and worked for in years for someone whose relationship with you is just within mere months. Besides there's no guarantees that the relationship would work so the gamble is definitely no in Kagome's favor if she later on choose not to proceed with the relationship. You did say it's still SESSKAG and I'll take your word for it.
Adomani (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
I can't wait for more ): !!!!!!!!!!
My favourite chapter so far. You have a great sense of tug and pull with the story
BBG336 (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
Okay, first off thank you for the update. The transition between Hiro and Maki's perspective was perfect. After some thought I'd say that Sesshomaru, Bankotsu and Maki each are being a little selfish when it comes to Kagome (demanding things from her). Hiro in my opinion has actually been selfish of his feelings(not sharing). Even though this is supposed to be a Sessh/Kag fanfic I feel like there's a long road ahead. Sesshomaru shouldn't be given an easy opportunity to romance Kagome. If anything he seriously needs to grovel forever and hope Kagome gives him a chance for being a tremendously selfish pig asking her to be his mistress. Anyway (still mad at him) , if Kagome won't leave with Bank I feel like she should leave for a little bit. Kagome should have her own time. Anyway as I said before I leave everything in your capable hands and I'm just getting so many different scenarios running through my head because your story is amazing.
So if Kagome goes with Bankotsu, she would be sitting alone in the middle of a war zone while her man is out fighting and she would be stuck there for years. How could someone as independent as her even consider that? It was selfish of him to even ask. He is not thinking about her well being at all. I said before that I hope she doesn't go. Now I really want her to stay where she is and for Bankotsu to go away as soon as possible. He just turned into a jerk.
Debra (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
I liked that you gave her a chapter. It was really sweet to read how much she depends on Kagome. She loves her like a big sister and doesn't want to lose that, especially to some guy she doesn't know. Even though Kagome leaving might force Hiro to let his love for her go she'd rather have Kagome there. I also like that you had Hiro watching the scene. Probably really glad that she was making such a scene about his secret love leaving.
I still wish Hiro would get somewhere with Kagome. Poor guy.
KairaB (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
I think she needs to stay. Great story so far. I really want Kagome and Sesshoumaru to have a happy ending together and raise little Isamu as if he were Kagome's child. Kagome would be the best mother-figure to him. I also wouldn't mind reading a seperate story where Kagome ends up with Hiro, he seems really sweet and it seems like he really loves her. Please consider it, maybe? Please, keep up the good work.^^
hey, anonymous. (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
hi! Once again, i beliece that she should stay... But sesshomaru should go. call me a cynic or pessimistic, but i don't see the allure of being friends with someone who had a romantic past with you and is allowing you to spend time with his child without the the real mom. That's just.. Wrong for me. No offense. That's just my opinion.
thank you very much for the update. :)
I still say she shouldn't go and I hope she figures out he's the guy she yelled at for breaking up with his gf in the cafe. I really don't like him. I love that Maki had her chapter though, it was really nice to see her like this.
Niomi (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
I know how opposites attract but I really feel Hiro deserves someone as mature as him. like a nice... Quiet.. Sweet love that would make him nervous too! Hah. That's just what I conclude of his character. Anyway. I don't really mind if Kagome goes , as long as it is in a way that is.. Smooth and makes sense. I don't want a time lapse like "a year later". Don't feel pressured by us ! ;) Do whatrever you feel is right because you are doing great so far. It's not like anyone can just stop reading anyway !
I laugh at all the reviews that ask for a character death or Sess s wife bashing, of course I'd like that too ! But that's too easy right. I can't wait for her confrontation with Kags
Please don't go! (Listen to the song by Tank for the dramtics). I think that Kagome should stay because . Maki is right, she should not leave her hard work and life behind again.
Lorz (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
I typically do not leave reviews but I've felt so inclined that here I am typing one out. I adore this story...and the emotional roller coaster that you have put us on is great. I have reread all the chapters multiple times and i've come to the conclusion that I'm furious at Sess. He threw away their relationship from the get go. So now my mind is made up...Kagome should go and see if the fluttering of her heart can turn out to something more with Bankotsu. I think that Bankotsu has more depth into his character then you are letting on. Not vicious but unknowing of love until now and Kagome will help balance him out. #kagomeshouldgo And Sesshomaru really needs to get his act together if he wants to be with Kagome. B/C the whole tangled up in a loveless marriage is awful but he put himself into that bed. And now he will have to struggle to unmake it if he will even remotely have a chance to be with Kagome. I'm thinking character death might be in order for things to pan out.
Cheers!
mary (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
Nice, love the conflicts, drama the roller coaster emotion, haha, but all in all i want kagome to have a happy life,.. Plz update soon :)
Jcdbunny (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
can't wait for sesshomaru's reaction, hope bank figures something out with kagome, I love the relationship hiro and maki has with kagome
Niomi (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Oct 2015
There might be more to Bankotsu than we know? Not in a bad guy way, maybe more depth? I don't know. Maybe im looking too much into things that isnt in your plan. I definitely think she should stay .. Otherwise how would her relationship with Sess develop. Maybe she should decide to go and Sess changes her mind. Its good to know Sess is working hard to get out of his marriage. But stilllllll , not used to seeing a Sess in stories not being in control of everything. I like Hiro, I don't know what plan you have for him but he's so sweet, itd be hard but theyd be cute together.. Kagome deserves a simple innocent relationship for once that's not all estrogen and ego. I don't think Hiro and Maki are good together!!! Update soon! :)
Adomani (Chapter 12) - Mon 19 Oct 2015
Omg. D: I want to know what would she decide, i like Bankotsu ):
Ree-san (Chapter 12) - Mon 19 Oct 2015
I think it's absurd he even asked. It feels like their relationship is casual. Certainly not something to move away from everything she's worked for to gamble on a relationship that's still developing. It doesn't seem like their lives are woven together or that they are even that close. I think it would be odd if she went for that.
BBG336 (Chapter 12) - Mon 19 Oct 2015
Hmm... honestly I'm at a lost as to what Kagome should do. The title sure makes one think of her situation. If Kagome were to leave she'd leave her gilded cage (literally) pursue a romance and possibly fight for another chance at love. Where Hiro could take care of the cafe, and have Sesshomaru really understand the matters of the heart (he should really make up his mind).
On the other hand leaving could have the possibility of Bank himself fighting for a chance at love and the story having 3 men vying for Kagome's affection and we get some drama from jealous females. But I digress and will leave the choice in your capable hands and wait in anticipation for the next chapter. Thank you!
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