LOL! I wonder if Kagome has a check list in her head from the nursury rhyme.
Big eyes... check
Big ears... check
*make sure holy powers and bow are ready after asking third question*
Big mouth... Gotcha!
Darn those Brothers Grimm really nailed this one.
hehehe. It just makes me giggle. Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next update!
inu (Chapter 2) - Mon 02 Jan 2012
awesome! can't wait to see some more sess and kag interaction :)
I love your story so far. This is an interesting plot. I look forward to reading more.
I love it I cant wait to read more.
There are a few minor grammatical errors in this (I am a nazi, I'm sorry) and the memory jump was a little disorienting, there wasn't a lot to separate it from the present. But otherwise this is a good, solid foundation for a story. I'm curious to see what happens next.
Venita (Chapter 1) - Mon 26 Dec 2011
This story is interesting, please update soon. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
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