nice

keep up the good work

Hitak was just living in her own fantasy lol it was so entertaining to read how wrapped up in herself she was only for Kagome to shatter it with her apperance xD Great chap :)

Hmmm hmmm then again youkai are older and I don't think they behaved like humans that they despised more often than not. There are no rapes in animal reign just mating season and they are after animal spirits no? I like this fic but some things make me uncomfortable and not the fact that it is dark. Thx for updating! I am waiting eagerly for every update! Just please don't make sesshoumaru psychotic! Wink kidding! Curious how will she fight! Hm also hope this won't be an Stockholm syndrome! Mutual understanding and respect should prevail! Thx for updating! Happy holidays!

So r u ever gonna update again!? 

I couldn't help but laugh at Sessh getting in a couple pumps before pulling out & just standing having a life or death conversation with a hard on lol xD 

This story is awesome.  Just found it and spent two days getting caught up.  I can't wait to see how Kagome fares agains the competition.  That whole Inuyasha scene was messed up, I'm with Kagome you can't marry a child.  And when the heck did he decide to approach Sesshoumaru to even ask that?  I really can't wait to see how Kagome's life will be like Red Riding Hood.

OMFG!!! Why do you tease me so?!? This story is too good, I need more. I can't wait until Kagone kicks her ass! what a battle this will be, but will Kagome kill her? I mean come on its Kagome and although her life was in danger, I know she doesnt kill for sport. How dare you stop my Sesshy for completing his mating!! ???? So many questions and comments that wants to be said, but I'll wait on the tip of my seat hoping not to fall over for the next chapter. I can't wait for the next update!!!!

Hi hmmmm... Still confused by this but I liked this chapter more. I can see a slight difference in kagome and your writing style??? Like I said sesshoumaru is canine and we know about canine loyalty and there is no more loyal and say honourable erm ... animal than a dog. Please don't make him a monster further. I can argue about his honour a little. some say it was low of him to use the unmother but we clearly hear that it was jaken.s idea and he only got along with it cause he was greedy and arrogant. Maybe I am seeing wrong please forgive me, but clearly he isn't portrayed as an abusive human of those times. Inuyasha is a different matter yes, so beating him is just different. Youkai politics and court may be different in you vision, but kagome was always strong. She never wavered in front of anyone. Never once during the anime so to paint her a scared weakling how others do its wrong, please don't go that road. Your fic has merit I like how you incorporated the idea and would like to see a logical virtual road for this fic. Many dark fics don't show the character growth and make sesshoumaru abusive without logic. More often then not he is obsessed and deranged. I would like to see him here as a strong feudal lord not crazy rapist. Ah  And and you use too instead of to many times. Exemple. He didn't want to.  Not he didn't want too. I am glad you updated thx. Will read further. Sorry for my rant again it's not flame!!! Take care and good luck!!!

Sesshomaru is definitely going to kill or torture her .

Oh wow, poor Kagome. She never seems to get a break. 

well this is contradictory. he wants to break her then he doesn't. he enjoys her defience then he punishes her for it. make your damn mind! i studied hystory i know of the role of females in the past and stuff the hierarcy was ridiculous! in this case i must disagree with this. in the anime it is showed that the youkai have a diferent aproach on things. the female is more independent and in canine packs a bitch can be leader we know that so to discriminate over feminity is absurd and just honourless. you make sesshoukaru acting  human when he is not. in packs the alfa will punish a member but not this way. i am not trying to be a witch just stating my opinion wich is only my own, i respect other's. his mother is in a position of power and is a leader respected. also as a person familiar with rape i must admit her behaviour is off but again its only my view, i may be stronger and have a diferent mentality. wasnt she taught in school about the behaviour in rape situations? we were and were told to try and not fight if its unavoidable. i find it logical that she threw up and stuff but to just go o her knees to do that? not believable? also as a contemporan female doesnt she know about binding in a contract? specify terms? and seems as everyone was pushing her toward him even her grandmother. what sane person would agree to her own flesh and blood to that situation? for greater good my foot! too many unanswered questions variables and ilogical things. i am sorry i am not trying to ofend you, i like the new way of this story but kagome is not so weak and stupid as to not know what to do. maybe she can try and pretend to lay low and bide her time? also when he is abusing her a  way would be to escape her inner world and not react so she is like a doll that will make him react. she always had a strong will so the fact that she is so easily controled by her body's wishes is ridiculous. i can tell you no matter how skilled the lover is if its rape and you hate that person you cant enjoy it. also like i said you retract to a inner world is a better solution. 

wishing you good luck. will follow this and see how you spin it. the idea has merit and i am curious to see more. please dont be ofended, my words are not meant as flame, its criticism in pure way. good luck. hope you update soon and please please dont make sesshoumaru dont believe kagome's words! i would be so disapointed...

Loving how dark and brilliant this is so far. Looking forward to your next update. :)

Yay!!! Every 2 weeks an update!!!! Yay!!! Oh goodness, where do I begin, where do I begin?!? They have arrived to the palace! I wonder why she can't touch the door? I mean it's a decorated door....anyways. Kagome has a hater amoung the handmaids....I hate that she was so in shock that she didn't whip the shit out of Hitak, mess with my Kagome there will be trouble. Luckily, Hinai didn't believe Hitak. Off to the dungeons her little lying butt will go. I can't wait to find out Sesshy's reaction to Hitak's behavior; trying to kill the Lady of the West. I know that's not going to go well. What a wonderful update, I truly can't wait until the next chapter!!

Ha she messed up big time

Wow wow wow author-Chan! This story is amaze. No, I literally finished your entire story up to chapter 13 in four hours. I like the progress.. I wonder if there will be a time when Kagome is treated like an equal to Sesshomaru, or if this master-servant relationship will continue.. Anyway, good job! 

Great chapters, keep it coming.

Honestly I am really enjoying this story. I think you have done an extraordinary job with it. Often we forget just how awful for women that time period was. This story holds that historical fact and interprets it well with these characters. I agree that the situation that Kagome  is experiencing is horrid and I in no way support such practices. However I believe you have described and expressed them well. Its unsurprising that Kagome never took the time to truly learn about canines or the treatment of women during the feudal era. Though honestly I hope she learns quickly for her sake. I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing how things progress. Not to mention how she reacts when she learns her title and position.

I am ready for this JOURRRRNNNEEEEYYY!!!!! This story is soo good! I truly enjoy reading this fic and I am sooooo very happy that you update this fic so soon!!! Thank you, Thank you!!! Court in an hour!! I wonder how Kagome is going to mess this up?!? Will she listen to his warning, and how? i can't wait until the next chapter!!

These last couple of chapters was very dark and intense. How could Sessho be so harsh and cruel to Kagome? He was very mean and I could not fathom the justification for treating her like a whore. He was so evil towards her. I guess even if she tried to use her powers on him they may not have worked except piss him off even more. My question is why and what does he need her for?

Nice writing and looking forward to future chapters.