and with the dark miko's help- kagome killed sesshomaru! his screams of agony and terror from having his cock forcibly removed, echoed through the palace halls long before he perished.
shortly after which, kagome abandoned the western lands to go back to being a miko and upon doing so- several months later, met up with inuyahsa- whom she savagely murdered with the very ax he had last been seen carrying after betraying her.
please update soon.
I love your story! I can't wait until the next chapter, it's getting so good!(:
I can't wait for the next chapter. I wanna see where you'll take the story line and characters. Keep up the good work. ^.^
Koree (Chapter 17) - Sun 05 Feb 2017
Sesshomaru laughing ? Sesshomaru smiling ? I was kinda freaked out lmfao Amazing chap
MASMA91 (Chapter 17) - Mon 30 Jan 2017
OMG. I just can't even...your story is so fucking awesome <3 can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's road to redemption, so to speak. And when he'll fall for her and then have to earn her trust back! yaaaaay!! Love it!! please update asap!! xxxx
When i heard dark miko i kinda expected tsubaki, but I'm pretty interested in your original character. It will be exciting that she won't be predictable.
Natalia (Chapter 17) - Mon 30 Jan 2017
Sorry I just read a comment to the new chapter and have to add my two cents. I hope too that kagome will be depicted stringer and not only give sesshoumaru the power and immunity to her powers. yes it's too typical that she can't hurt him. for a change let her be able to harm him. and her handmaiden is confused with kagome s words. she needs to gradually start explaining and change her since she us stuck in her ways.
Natalia (Chapter 17) - Mon 30 Jan 2017
I wonder if he meant to say his life not wife when he was thinking to himself no? I really hope he will soon start to understand and see the things from her pov and it was hilarious to see kagome think about the Stockholm syndrome! this sesshoumaru is not likeable at this point so I find myself hoping kagome will run away and he,ll remain with the literal tail between his legs! and no happy ending for him! and I don't hate it like you though ok? it is just a fic I enjoy it but showing so negative emotions for a fic is too much. at least I try! I do not usually read dark since almost everywhere sesshoumaru is mostly deranged psychotic and obsessed. but in yours I hope to see character growth and maturing not just him acting crazy just because it's dark. good luck and thx for updating!
Koi (Chapter 17) - Mon 30 Jan 2017
I am ready for this long haul! I promise you! This is a fantastic story! I truly can't wait until the nest chapter, I wonder how Kye will train Kagome?!? Thank goodness Kagome can't harm my...i mean her mate, Sesshomaru! This battle is going to be an epic battle, and I truly can't wait until that day comes. I have always wanted Kagome to do more with her powers, than what she has been able to do...teleporting arrow...seriously. Well, that's enough of my babble. Until next month for the next chapter! I truly can't wait!!
Nice chapter. Set him back on his heels a bit, did she? Thanks for the update.
As long as the haul will yield results and come to a completion, I will be with you
Bree (Chapter 17) - Sun 29 Jan 2017
I hate when reviewers say Kagome has a lot to learn, like her being tortured and raped is her fault because she is an independent woman. So what if the era she is in is known to have woman treated as cattle and slaves. She is said to be powerful so why not ask for that power to be shown, instead of having Kagome to learn to deal with it, she shouldn't have to. Ugh anyways I totally agree with Jaz, prove she is powerful by having her fight back Sesshoumaru and winning, otherwise this is just going to be a typical fanfic. And that would just be a bore, please be different.
Jaz (Chapter 17) - Sun 29 Jan 2017
I was hoping she fatally injured Sesshoumaru. I hate reading fanfics that gives him all the power and not Kagome, but also says she is powerful and does nothing with it. It would be nice to read about Kagome causing Sesshoumaru harm and pain, instead of it being solely directed on her. Why can't she do on to him what he has done to her. Please create scenarios like that. He brought a dark miko to train her and it would be awesome if said miko taught Kagome a few tricks to harm Sesshoumaru in secret. Allow her powers to dominate him.
Great chapters. While I love the fluffier versions of their relationship and I probably always will, a part of me feels that this is exactly how Sesshomaru would behave. He has not, after all, adapted to more modern ways of treating a woman. That is centuries away. In the far East, few women had power. Kagomes modern ways would get her beaten, raped or killed. She has a very hard road here and a lot to learn. I hope that our demon Lord learns some new things also. Looking forward to your next chapter. Good luck with your classes. Done properly, online classes can take up a lot of time. I found that I enjoyed the give and take of the classroom more.
I find myself engrossed in the plot and eager to read more, at your convenience. Many thanks.
Wow oh WOW! I've read this far and I'm just gobsmacked! I'm also hooked and I have to know where this goes.
Glad that she handled the challenge well. Just wondering why hitak was allowed to dine with them
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