I love love this story.. though I am in tears right ow cause i can't hit the next chappy. please update very very soon

Wow, you pulled me right in, and I couldn't stop reading!  I love  your storyline and you have captivated me.   Looking forward to your next update!

Great chapter. I can not wait to find out who  the mysteries woman Akiho really is.

I'm lovin this.

really enjoying this  thanks for the new chapter   looking forward to more

This was nicely done.  I'm so used to stories with battle, fighting, blood, and things being purified that reading this was a nice change.  I feel like this is the end or close to it, but I can't wait for your next update.  Please update again soon.

Thanks for the updated. Keep up the good work?

The next chapter is gonna be amazing! This one was incredible!!!

Please update

Omg, I love it. Such original ideas. Patiently waiting for the next installment, can't wait for the new chapter to come out.

really enjoying your story   looking forward to more chapters 

I love this soooooooo much!!!! You are an amazing and crazy talented person. And I love that you have taken heartbreak and sadness from your own life and turned it into something so pure and insightful (the flowers). Thank you so much for sharing your story with us. It's honestly one of the best ones I've had the pleasure of reading. I look forward to your next chapter. <3

This is such an awesome story! I can't wait until you update next. I appreciate the character development and not jumping strait into love at first sight. And the development of all the other characters how they survived but now they are starting to live again. Although I would like to learn  more about what they survived an why it affected them the way it did.

I have to say I was skeptical at first when I read it thinking "it's canon universe before the gang defeated Naraku and Kagome LEFT?! Where are they going with this plot?!?!" I have to say,  I'm glad I decided to read it anyways. My condolences about your friend that passed. I'm sorry that you had to experience something like that as well as everything  associated with the accident. I'm glad your mom won against her cancer. Congrats on graduating and becoming a functioning part of society! I'm beyond ecstatic that my prediction about Kagome was confirmed!! To be honest I have no idea how you're about to transition back to their traveling. The personalities are all pretty canon although I would never have imagined that Sesshoumaru would speak so much. Thanks for the wonderful update! I spent a good portion of my day today reading straight through this. I'm sorry that I didn't find this sooner. I'll not sure you *need a beta, but there are minor grammatical mistakes at times. Nothing that took away from the writing, but they are present. Again, they are minor. I don't know, I'm a beta currently and the one I'm betaing for seems to find it handy. A beta could help you iron out any difficulties you're having concerning plot holes, though. Anyways, all the best! 

I can't wait for more! 

Love this fic!  Just spent the last little while re-reading it.  Cannot wait to see where you take everything.  It seems to me that one thing was not really explained, which was, why would going back to the Western Citadel doom it and its inhabitants?  You introduced the Citadel so well and completely, but then just dropped it...id like to hear more about it and the refugees that now surround it.  And what is in the south?

You must update ASAP!

Don't worry I understood what you meant so the transition between you head and this post went well.  I was actually surprised that was the secret.  It was unique and not something I've ever read before.  So well done.

As for needing a beta, well I think you're doing just fine on your own.  I'm of the opinion that unless you know your beta personally or at least have long time friendship you never know how long it will take to get your work back.  Then you have to read through it again to see the changes and see if they make sense before you post it.  It's one thing to take forever for a chapter to get posted when you're doing all your own editing and rereading and such, but for it to take longer because you have to wait on someone else is just annoying.  I do all my own editing.  I catch spelling mistakes or a word that's not right because later on because I spent so much time staring at the work and just didn't see it, but it's the chapter I wanted to go out without someone adding their two cents that would have changed it to something else.

I guess I prefer to do it all myself, so if you prefer that then continue on as you have.  If you can find the right person as a beta then go for that if you want to.

As for Kirara, to be honest I forgot about her as well.  I say don't worry about it.  I've read stories where Sango and Miroku disappear from the story without an explanation and the story is still good and finishes well.  But if it really bothers you you can say you killed her off early on as a sacrifice to help the others get away.

P.S. I haven't forgotten you mentioned a new story.  Are you still working on that when you can or thinking about it?

"Kagome couldn’t imagine ever needing such flowers though, " 

I watch Steven Universe and you just don't mention something like that just so.

I enjoyed this chapter. Kagome fills me a strength I did not think I could possess. But I know it's you, your words penned to the internet give folks like me strength. 

Àaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i.need more where is the rest .... listen im willing  to harass you for an update im dying here 

That was excellent! As Kagome is not a youkai, what better way to convey how she feels and to reach him then by him experiencing her feelings associated with thoughts. It was beautiful and tragic, but I believe you did it! Excellent job!