Great Chapter! Very exciting and I can't wait for the next one! Thank you for posting!
Hey there! Your other fic, Tightrope, led me to this one. I really liked Tightrope, so much that I obviously needed more of your writing hence why I ended up here. I wish I had found this story earlier. It's really amazing. It's full of soul, at least thats how i feel when I read the characters' explanations of why they feel the way they do. The chapter with Miroku was amazing, and the perfect example.
Moreover, I really appreciate how you don't take the "easier" way out of the problems, most notable example is the Shikon jewel problem. You found a way to integrate it into the rest of the plot and it ended up becoming a brilliant addition to the story :)
Anyway, as I was reading this fic many thoughts came up but I cant seem to remember them all right now haha just please know that I will watch out for this story because so far, it has answered to all and more of what I expect a good Sess/Kag fic should have.
I look forward to how the rest of the story unfolds!
Namida (Chapter 15) - Sun 28 Jul 2013
ahhh!I do hope you are able to continue this story soon!! I hope all is well in your life ^_^
Hope to read more of this wonderful story
Great chapter, please update the next chapter quick. Keep it coming.
i loved this i honestly hope you get more uploaded
Thank you for explaining the fate of the Jewel. I guess I wasn't the only one wondering about that. :) Can't wait for the next chapter. BTW, love how you explained about Kagome's soul! Very original! Great job! :D
I'm really enjoying your story. It's very well written, and I love how you are portraying Kagome.
I do have one question, though, and I hope you'll be able to answer it soon. You've included Naraku and the fact that he has apparently perished, cause unknown, but what happened to the Shikon Jewel? This has not been mentioned, and I am very curious. Even Kagome has recognized the fact that she returned to complete her duty, but even she has not questioned the whereabouts of the Jewel. Just a thought. Thank you, and on to the next chapter. :D
Tammy (Chapter 15) - Fri 21 Jun 2013
I really love this story. It is so in depth and this last chapter was the best! I look forward to reading this to the very end :)
tonya (Chapter 15) - Thu 20 Jun 2013
this was a great chapter!
rose (Chapter 15) - Thu 20 Jun 2013
next chapter please
I like your take on the Shikon jewel, it is very original. Many fanfictions have Kagome as not being Kikyo's reincarntion, but none say the legend concernng Midoriko is only a legend. That is one of the most original things I have found, in fact. This was a nice chapter, and I'm curious to find out what Bokuseno meant at the end. "They reach you."?
Loved it. And you were right about the use of the jewel. I've read where the situation with the jewel brought her to that time to meet her mate early, but never that the jewel was created to bring her there. I also like all the information. Details make a story more better to read, so no apologizing for it. If people don't like it then they don't have to read it. I also like the deal about her not being Kikyou's reincarnation. Sometimes I get irritated at that fact.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. =)
melissa (Chapter 15) - Thu 20 Jun 2013
I really love this story. Bokusenou and Kagome being Best Friends from like before time itself. WOW!!!!!! Poor Shippo and Rin. I hope the heartack and pain that Shippo feels will not last long and he will finally talk to Kagome-mama. I just know Rin will be fine and the four of them will be a family with Bokusenou always around as the best friend/uncle. Please up-date soon. Good luck
selen84 (Chapter 14) - Sun 16 Jun 2013
This story is intriguing, exciting ... I love it. The plot is compelling, the events leave me breathless, the characters and their development are compelling ... congratulations, your story is fantastic. Mel (from Italy)
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