I love they way this story is progressing.  Please keep up the excellent job.  I will keep watching for new chapters, you are writing very well.  Thank you..

It was a good chapter. Thank you for updating.

I think you did a wonderful job in writing the kissing scene. It wasn't an overkill.  I especially like the vision scene with Kagome and Boukesnou. It gave me an insight into his mind that I never would have thought he had. Beautifully written. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. 

The wait was so worth it!!  I was assuming the sibling was Shippo, man was I wrong!  You are truly a talented writer and to have the courage to post what you have written is amazing!  Don't let they naysayers bother you.  It's always easy to criticize.  Your story has a wonderful flow and the characters are amazingly well written.

Welcome back.  First and formost I really liked this chapter and thought it merged well with the rest of the story.  So as far as I'm concerned you should have no worries there.  I thought the kiss was well done.  I'm sure I'll use it as inspiration since I have a mating scene to write between Kagome and Sesshomaru in one of my Inuyasha stories.

Anyway, I also liked the explanation of the dark and Kagome's role as the light.  It definitely explained why her soul had to remain the way it was.  Now I'm wondering if she's going to keep that information to herself or tell everyone.  If she tells everyone I would worry about them trying to stop her.  First they think she's the answer to the darkness then when they learn that she literally is, try and keep her from doing what she needs to do to keep her safe.  I think she should either keep it to herself or just tell Sesshomaru.  He would understand the logic of the light and dark and accept her decision.  I also wonder if she and Sesshomaru will mate before she takes in the darkness.  Maybe their connection will help ground her, give her something to hold on to if she has trouble balancing the two aspects inside herself.

Can't wait for your next update.  If you need to, take your time getting back into the flow of writing.  Your readers will wait.  Maybe even try writing a new story, something short to help get the writing juices flowing.  Good luck. :)

This story is f***ing amazing! I am so in love with it. I am loving the new twists on old characters! Keep writing! More please!!

Started reading last night and I'm in love please update soon.

This was a heartbreakingly beautiful chapter. I send my condolences to you for your loss. The hardest thing to do when a loved one is gone is to keep living. Just remember that the one you cared for is still supporting you from within. Moving forward is never easy, but it takes a special kind of strength to take that first step. Once you've done so, eventually the other steps get easier. 

I am super happy that you are back and working on your story again. I am so sorry for the loss of your friend. I cried while readin this chapter and you can really tell that you loved and cherished your friend. I can't wait to find out what's next. Keep up the amazing work and I'm going to stick with you until this story is complete. It is a really great story and adds different twists like nothing I've ever seen.

I love your story! I can't wait to read more in the future. :D

From the description Rin sounds adorable. I can't wait to see how Kagome handels Shippo!

thank you for writing this. thank you for sharing yourself. thank you. 

I have no words to say that you haven't already heard. But I am at least glad you were able to find a way to let your grief out, and to share this with us. I hope I am not out of bounds by saying that your loved one is now safe and are never truly gone from us.

In every little thing were in a second things change in your favor or when the light shines down from the clouds in a brilliant light, know that they are with you.

You have brought us a fantastic story and we will gladly wait and continue to read on. I wish you the wellest week, and that the weather is warm to you.

I am very sorry to hear about the loss of your friend! I pray for God to give you strength and many blessings! Welcome back!

Let me being by saying,  I am sorry for your loss, it is hard saying goodbye to those that mean a great deal to us.  It took me a long time to realize that our loved ones leave behind indelible memories with us that mark on our soul, so we can carry them with us forever.   When we bring them forth, they will make us laugh, cry, smile and remember the time we spent with them; Which in the end, will make us stronger. With that said, I absolutely loved your updated. It was beautifully written and a heartfelt way to say goodbye. It shows, in your writing, that you are becoming stronger and that your friend is with you even now.  I look forward to your next update, no matter how long it takes, know that your faithful readers will be here waiting.  Good to have you back!

I'm sorry for your lost. I know how it feels to lose someone and not being able to say goodbye. I lost my older sister to a hit and run. I still live with some guilt of not going with her when she asked me to. I still feel that if I had went she would have been here. I just remember that she is gone physically but not her spirit. As long as I remember who and what she is to me. I know she is with me everyday. Hope the same for you. Time heals all wounds but a scar's will remain so we don't forget how and who made them. Let yours be one of happiness like mine is for my sister. In the end we will see them again.

Good luck!!  Glad to have you back!!

I'm so sorry for your loss. Welcome back you were sorely missed :)

I'm so sore for your loss. Welcome back you were sorely missed :)