Reviews for A Debt to Be Paid by Rinku

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Ashatan (Chapter 23) - Fri 26 Feb 2016

I absolutely LOVE this story. I can't wait to see what happens next between Seshy and Kags. 


Koree (Chapter 23) - Thu 25 Feb 2016

Lol xD " drag her into the bushes & show her how ruthless he can be " this chap had soooo many funny moments but that was my fav . Amazing chap :)


Blommie8 (Chapter 23) - Tue 23 Feb 2016

roberta. (Chapter 19) - Wed 17 Feb 2016

I agree with the reviewer before me. They make a valid point. Kagome seem  like a mentally challenged child in this.


roberta. (Chapter 19) - Wed 17 Feb 2016

Made me smile


DeathDagger (Chapter 12) - Tue 16 Feb 2016

I really want to finish this story but your portrayal of Kagome is so naive and ignorant. She is a intelligent woman from the 21st century and yet you have her acting klutzy and idiotic. I've read a lot of stories over the years and I can not understand why he wants her in this one. She is utterly juvenile and I hate it because this story has such promise...


anna1989 (Chapter 23) - Sun 14 Feb 2016

:0 what is kagome to say!? I really luv every chapter of this story ....thanks for the continued posts(: update soon please! oh, & Happy Valentine's Day ^^


Lazurite (Chapter 17) - Fri 12 Feb 2016

What took him so long?


Lazurite (Chapter 12) - Fri 12 Feb 2016

Is Miroku dead? Is Sesshoumaru going to get him?!


Saiya (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

hahaHahahahaha That was Awsome Poor Kagome she Almost Pissed herSelf.


KShadeslady (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

Oh my....Giggling!! Wow! Such a lovely long chapter! Thanks so much. Well worth the wait. Cheers!


Lazurite (Chapter 8) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

I thought he didn't have his other arm back yet? How did he stop the car?


SessQueen (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

Love this story. It gets better and better each chapter.


REDWOLF (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

OH, I can't wait for Jaken to get Kagome's wrath!!! Jaken is a pest. Sesshoumaru...well he won't even know what hit his behind...LOL!


Lazurite (Chapter 5) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

So could he use the debt to make her mate him if she says no at the end of the courting period? That seems kinda slimy.


Lorena (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

Now, I admit to sometimes wanting to choke Sesshomaru sometimes,  but I'm rooting for him right now!  I'm glad they haven't crossed that lemon line  because the understanding of each other hasn't even grazed friendship, and I worry that it'll cause more harm then good. It seems like Kagome will have to be the first to accept this and help Sesshomaru realize the potentially beautiful relationship... but who knows~ I'm eager to read what you have planned for these two


KairaB (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

I think you should have Kagome plant new trees when she gets to the Western palace so that Bokuseno can keep watch over them and fully reconcile the tension between the Western family and Bokuseno. Great story so far. Please, keep up the good work.^^


Ankita (Chapter 23) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

Loved this chapter <3 please update moreeee moreee moreeee and sooon sooon soooonnnnn


Lazurite (Chapter 2) - Thu 11 Feb 2016

I don't think insulting Inuyasha is going to win her over...


inuyoukai3008 (Chapter 22) - Mon 11 Jan 2016

Please post another chapter I want to read what happens next 


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