Reviews for A Debt to Be Paid by Rinku

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Haven (Chapter 6) - Thu 28 May 2015

I'm hoping for an encounter with Hojo in the next chapter


Haven (Chapter 5) - Thu 28 May 2015

The last part made me giggle


Haven (Chapter 3) - Thu 28 May 2015

oh the plot is so interesting...and how demon law is..I've never read a fanfiction with the same demon law in it. 


Haven (Chapter 2) - Thu 28 May 2015

Is he gonna visit her time!?


Haven (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 May 2015

I just love how Inuyasha wakes up at THAT moment XD


Aziza (Chapter 19) - Tue 24 Mar 2015

This is a really addicting story, I really just want more of it! 


Minime (Chapter 19) - Sat 28 Feb 2015

I love this story. Please update soon. Do not abandon us and leave us hanging. Can't wait to know what will happen to them in the west.


SesshysDA (Chapter 12) - Sun 11 Jan 2015

I am loving this story. Been reading it non stop! My only thing is that it's reading like Sesshomaru had both his arms around chapter 11/12 but I felt like he was still missing his left one earlier in the story. Did I miss something or am I miss reading?


Crystal (Chapter 19) - Sat 10 Jan 2015

For so long we have been stuck at that cliffie!! Please update with another chapter! I keep this story saved and keeping hoping it'll be updated sometime.


Gandhi (Chapter 19) - Mon 01 Dec 2014

This story is fantastic. I hope you're still updating it! :)


Saiya (Chapter 19) - Mon 15 Sep 2014

I've Read ALL the chapters and LOVED Them.


Calan! (Chapter 19) - Tue 01 Jul 2014

This is really good! Curious to see if you are going to update since it's been so long.


katarakta (Chapter 19) - Fri 30 May 2014

It's one of my favourite stories by far. I really love the slow pace of characters and feelings' development and that it's not next of many fanfictions with (too quickly) mellow Sesshomaru. Keep it up! Please update soon, because I'm dying of curiosity! <3


Eden (Chapter 19) - Sat 10 May 2014

I would love to read more. Update asap please. 


Samara (Chapter 19) - Sat 19 Apr 2014

I noticed something at chapter 16... but I doubted myself.  Other than the rabbit she caught, Kagome has made no real attempt to eat since she was in the future... she has got to be some kind of hungry... she didnt even get to eat the rabbit.. its no wonder she is tired all of the time...

I hope she gets to take shippo with her to the west.  Oh and I thought it was so funny she was thinking of random crap to annoy him.  I was thinking towards the beginning of the story if I had this link I would annoy the crap out of him... I would think-sing the "I know a song that gets on everybodys nerves" song... and maybe "Its a small world afterall"(my dad hates that one... lol)... She should definitely think more stuff about her period and cramps... just gross him out stuff... so much potential here... 

 

I can't wait for the next chapter.   I love the length of the chapters and the story development pace.  The limes are good and just enough to keep the story legit. KUDOS! On the edge of my seat for the next update!


Anonymous (Chapter 19) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

I hate Sesshoumaru. With him, it's one step forward, two steps back. For one so old it's unfitting to convince himself again and again that he has no feelings and doesn't need feelings and blah. He even contradicts himself as he already admitted to Kagome that she is more than a breeder to him in one of the first chapters (the chapter where he "surprised" her in her bedroom). No feelings? As if anger, disgust, disdain, boredom and arrogance weren't emotions. Freud would shake his head about him. Poor Kagome. I hope that she stays strong and keeps refusing him. It just wouldn't be in character for her to fall in love with someone who doesn't love her in return. I also hope that Sesshoumaru can learn. Yes, he is very in character, indeed. But it would be so frustrating if he continued being such a prick :( In the last chapters the story seems to go round in circles a bit. There is very little character development ...


Loren (Chapter 19) - Sun 19 Jan 2014

Wow, this chapter was uploaded a year ago.. I hope you're going to continue it.

So well writen, it will be a shame to leave it as it is :(

Please have some marcy on us and keep it coming! Iwas really enjoying reading it..


Ana (Chapter 19) - Sun 08 Dec 2013

Please update please please pleeeeease *-* 


Moemoe (Chapter 19) - Mon 04 Nov 2013

ahhh neeed more O.O


Renee Mannings (Chapter 19) - Sun 13 Oct 2013

Please don't abandon this fic!!!


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