Reviews for A Debt to Be Paid by Rinku

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Rachel (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Sep 2013

PLEASE update! I love this story so much, and it would be a shame to see it end here! ;_;


satuross (Chapter 16) - Sun 08 Sep 2013

its too difficult reading this. there is hardly ANY closure kags x inuyasha.... and kagome is become more and more like inuyasha genderswap and kikyo


Jai (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Sep 2013

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Maria Florencia Taylor (Chapter 19) - Sat 17 Aug 2013

Hey! Hi! well I love your story so far! are you goin to continue it? 


Jai (Chapter 1) - Thu 18 Jul 2013

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Elena Wachob (Chapter 19) - Mon 08 Jul 2013

i love this story!
I NEED MOOOOOAAAARRRRR 


kinsey (Chapter 19) - Fri 21 Jun 2013

I hope this continues :(


thoughtcriminal (Chapter 19) - Fri 31 May 2013

I originally found this story over on adultFF.net and thought it was abandoned.  I was so pleased to find you were still working with it.  This story is such a gem: good plot, great characterization, amusing and realistic dialogue, and fun smexy scenes with our favorite pair!  You had commented somewhere that you were concerned about pacing to get to a "lemon,” and although I enjoy my naughty fun as much as the next person, I would say pacing is more important.  So many stories rush off with Kagome and Sesshie as practically perfect soul mates, mated in two chapters, him raping her, and so on and so forth.  A nice long, slow approach just makes your fic stand out more!  I hope you update soon. 


BlackroseDragonis (Chapter 19) - Thu 30 May 2013

I love your story so far, you use great details. Mentally I get great ideals like that but when I go to jot it down or type the story all thoes details just poof and I can't think to well. Anywho I can't wait for updated because I am loving this fiction. Oh yeah stop teasing with limes and give a good detailed juicy lemon for you reads to take a bite from.


rose (Chapter 19) - Mon 20 May 2013

next chapter please


Chaos Ninja (Chapter 19) - Sun 19 May 2013

I know how she is in the manga, and I like that you're sticking with her personality, but it's been three almost four yeras, and you've obviously made her much stonger, so why does she still seem so helpless? I know what she's been going through is a bit overwhelming, but she's always been determined and pushed through, so I don't know why see keeps getting so easily overpowered by everyone if she's apparently strong enough that even Sesshoumaru wants her as a mate. You don't have to make her a skilled warrior or anything, but her miko powers should be something to recon with. I irritates me how Sesshoumaru just seems to walk all over her. I want HER to get the better of HIM for a change! She's been through a lot, I think she deserves to finally gain som ground, even if it's just making Sesshoumaru wary of angering her, something! I know that there are things he's doing to protect her, but I keep waiting for karma to come and nip at him a little for the callous, ans sometimes down right cruelty he sometimes shows her, 'cause a lot of the way he treats her isn't necessary. I'm just having a very difficult time how she could possibly fall in love with him, espcailly when it's against her will. He's taking her freedom, free will, and is WAY too controling. It doesn't have to be anythign drastic, but I'd like to see him brought down a peg or two.


Hassanah (Chapter 19) - Fri 22 Mar 2013

Heyyyy! Ah I was so happy when I found this on here! I read this on adultfanfiction, Ibelieve. But when I saw on here I was sure it was updated more recent, you mutt! Lol I really liked this and thought it would never be updated. Btw people that are asking for the lemon, please don't rush it. I think that the whole waiting for a lemon keeps you more interested in the story trust me once the lemon has been done, unless I've waited like 30 to 40 chapters ( and those chapters were full of a twisty plot that has you t the edge ofyour seat wondering what will happen next, will I read it through. Lol thisstory is basically revolving around Sesshoumaru and Kagomebathe one thing I am anticipating is the lemon lol so keep us waiting !  Even though I so badly want them to... Not too long, eh? Lol update soon pretty please xx


Nyuka (Chapter 19) - Wed 06 Feb 2013

Now all I can picture is a disco ball on the end of her finger as she does some kind of stareotipical disco point dance as a lazer is pointed into its reflective surface  causing that lazer dance show you were talking about ot dance arounder her.... its kind of a funny thought.

 

I don't really like this Sesshoumaru...T-T even if he is in character...he is such jerk ... I wonder if he soul is somewhere else and he is just a walking around without a soul... I say this because his demeanor reminds me of how Sam acted from "Supernatural" when his soul was still traped in h*ll.  I guess it would make a bit of sense since he is a demon....

 

Weird thought what if some how his soul was put inside Inuyasha when he was a baby...that would like make it totaly hate Inuyasha...I think I want to write that story some how....^-^  It might get too weird though...lol

 

Nyuka


LadySakura (Chapter 19) - Wed 30 Jan 2013

wow that was a long chapter, it was written very well

 


Kachina (Chapter 19) - Mon 28 Jan 2013

continue. i like where this story is going. i am patient. but please continue.


MikiBrea (Chapter 19) - Sun 27 Jan 2013

Rinku!!! I love this story so much. I know you do your best but damnit woman! I know it's selfish but I wish you had nothing else to do in your life but write this fanfiction. >:D It's too good to wait for so long. The anticipation kills me so much that I check if you've updated this fic. every single day. I find that most SesshKag fictions are not realistic and like your awards suggest you are amazing at writing for them. I feel though that this 19th chapter has set them apart again slightly. :( They were just getting to the point to where they were progressing (in my opinion at least)! I think I know what your doing with this though and am looking forward to seeing if I am right when it comes to why your having him somewhat distance himself.

In my thoughts I wonder if it's because if he pushes her too much she won't want him even more so than she did in the earlier chapters. However, if he plays hard to get she will come to him! -Suggestive wiggly brows insert here- AND THEN! We will have our lemon at last.

Then again your always suprising me with your amazing plot twists and lime-ie goodness. ;) Keep posting good work and know that although you've lost fans for this because of this or that, you have atleast one fan who is dedicated beyond all get out. This fanfiction is so amazing and I love you for it, for it is my favorite fic. ^^ <3


Serpentine (Chapter 19) - Tue 22 Jan 2013

Loving this story so far and I'm eager for your next update!


reminiscence (Chapter 19) - Sun 20 Jan 2013

This chapter was kind of informative. I can't wait for the next chapinuyasha sesshomaru's reasoning for hating inuyasha.

 


Pricila (Chapter 19) - Fri 11 Jan 2013

I think its wonderful!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 19) - Fri 11 Jan 2013

It's been three months and four weeks since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, keep it coming. Happy New Year!


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