I think your story is great, I LOVE!! I hope that you will update soon so that we can all see what happens next!!
I can't wait to see what will happen next. I'm very excited & I really hope that will be the end of Kikyo & she won't be returning. I'm trying to figure out what's going to happen next. I imagine that when Kikyo was killed Kagome knew because she got the rest of her soul back. Kikyo only had a small part of Kagome's enormous soul but I wonder if when she got the soul piece back if she got info with it . It would make sense that she got all the knowledge of what was going on in Kikyo's mind when she re-died & that she knows exactly what's going on in the feudal era now & why it's happening. I wouldn't be surprised if she got the visual of everything Kikyo was doing & when & with whom...like a play by play...I wonder if Inuyasha was trying to kill Kagome & her unborn child because he snapped because of Kagome ending up with Sessh even though he'd been with Kikyo all that time, was he lost enough to believe that he could do whatever he wanted & Kagome would never have anyone even though he didn't want her & figured that unless he told her out & out that he didn't love her or did he feel she needed his permission or approval to ever be with anyone or was it that after he smelled Sessh on Kagome when she returned from bathing in the spring that time he then started to panic & when he found out everything when Sessh beat the crap out of him & got Kagome from her time because she was having his pup did he just lose it & didn't know what to do.Then when the rest of the pack saw how unstable he was becoming & started to fear that he was going to hurt Kagome so they took off to go to Kagome to warn or protect her,did he then feel completely abandoned at that point when he was still in shock about Kagome & Sessh. Then when he was alone & in shock,feeling lied to & then abandoned by his pack ...(before he had a chance to talk to & see Kagome & Sessh & work it all out in his mind ) did he lose his mind & is that when Kikyo convinced him it would be fine to stalk & kill his supposed best friend that had done so much for him after freeing him from the tree ,had he already lost his sense of reason or lose his ability to remember all that Kagome had ever done for him & given him (love,kindness, trust, family, friendship...even his sword) or did Kikyo put him under a spell where he just believed & did everything she told him without remorse or guilt,I mean he even followed them thru the well & watched her interact with her family (her family that treated him like he was family) & was willing to kill her there with her family around. The fact that he had some kind of cloak that blocked his aura/youkai like Naraku wore (in your story where it spoke of what he got from Kikyo to wear to hide himself the words were jarbled or unclear but it seemed like it referred to a cloak similar to the baboon cloak that Naraku wore) & he used this to stalk them .....did he even think of where/how she suddenly had access to objects of evil or deception???
Now that I think about it since Kikyo had become evil then that part of Kagome's soul she had would be corrupted & contain evil but I would hope that with Kagome's enormous soul & her powerful purity ability it would instantly purify the evil from the tainted piece of soul just as she was able to purify the corrupted evil shards. If she could purify something as evil as Naraku's essence from the jewel then I think purifying the evil of Kikyo would be nothing. I wish this story gave some info on what happened to the jewel ,how the well still works,Kagome's powers & abilities now,Kagome's age,the reason Sessh chose Kagome to birth his pup & become his mate. Does Kagome have the ability to birth purebred youkai that would be immune to holy power??? There has to be a reason or more than one that Sessh would choose her as his Mate & to birth his heir. He must know more than he's let on & why was he watching her....he is too powerful & been around way too long to just succumb to instant lust. He had to know by her scent that she was fertile, he had to already have realized she would never abandon a child of her own if she adopted a youkai kit & I just find it hard to believe that he would do something as life altering as this without researching this & waiting for the perfect opportunity. Isn't it in his Inuyoukai nature for his beast to want the most perfect,powerful Mate that would give them the most powerful pups....pups more powerful then themselves?
If Kagome knows everything that Kikyo knew then she would know if Kikyo had him under a spell or curse or was controlling or manipulating him somehow but, then I wonder if Kikyo is now dead & she was using some way so she could keep him under her control in some way would her dying snap him out of it instantly ,once he calmed down or once it wore off or if there is something on him physically that needs to be removed then only Kagome would know . I wonder if they'll have to kill him. I really hope that Kagome received Kikyo's info & or knowledge with the soul piece being returned cause I think that would be cool & I think it would make sense if someone had a stolen piece of your innermost being,your essence...your soul & kept it & used it to keep themselves alive for years then I think it would make sense that when it was returned to you it would bring all of the experiences & knowledge it gained along with it ,I mean ...I feel that it would contain all that it had accumulated . Right now all we know is Kagome knows Kikyo is dead & they have to immediately return. Sorry about going on & on but I couldn't help thinking of all the possibilities of what will happen next.
Enaiyeu (Chapter 20) - Tue 30 Nov 2010
momma H is really a Bish in this isn't she! and inuyasha =x hahahahaha *does NOT feel bad for him* *hopes kagome pinns him to a new tree!
ShadowKitsune67 (Chapter 19) - Sat 27 Nov 2010
I really like your fic so far, looking forward to your update :)
Sala (Chapter 19) - Fri 26 Nov 2010
There are A LOT of spelling and grammatical errors in this chapter. :(
lara (Chapter 18) - Tue 16 Nov 2010
Now I'm dying to know what's going to happen next. I can't believe Inuyasha has either completely snapped & is now insane or Kikyo has him under a spell where he'll do whatever she says,Just the fact that he's really stalking Kagome while pregnant with the intent of killing her & her baby is insane. I can't believe they killed Naraku & left Kikyo to wander as the undead, I thought she didn't have any other purpose with Naraku gone...she could finally rest in peace or kill her to keep her from trying to kill Kagome or at least from the torture of wandering as an undead. were they able to dispose of the jewel ? & if so, how did it happen ?was there a pure wish involved or is the jewel still around or in Kagome ? Was Sessh stalking Kagome as she bathed with the intent of pupping her with a wait & see attitude regarding whether or not he would mate her? & why would Sessh want a pup with Kagome (a human) knowing it would be a hanyo & how he hates humans & hanyos??? I can't wait to see what happens next.
lmao! love it when kagome gets home, what fun!
poor hachi!
as for inuyasha, kagome's still got the beads on him so, she should say Sit! and BAM hanyou! i also think that someone should be sent after kikyo! she's the root of all evil!
okay so kagome still has beads on inuyasha, shouldnt someone be sent after kikyo. b/c thats the best way to get him back.
If Sam is indeed Pregnant again, I hope nothing happens to the baby while she is expecting.
Thanks
Lady Nefertiti.
Tsuki (Chapter 15) - Mon 08 Nov 2010
That was really sad that Sam and Rhys's baby died :( I am glad you updated! Keep up the good work!
love your fic as always. Sesshomaru and Rhys are so overprotective of their mates and so jealous!---and the way the girls teased them lol. I can't believe that Rhys and Samara were old enemies (well their dads in any case). update soon!
missy (Chapter 1) - Sun 31 Oct 2010
this is a really great wonderful story that i like and love very muhc since i first started reading it your a very great author who wrote this very great and wonderful story.
good update!
How adorable Sesshomaru was somewhat jealous when the toddler said "mine!" and he said "No runt she is mine." lol....still loving it. Thanks for the fast update.
O_O stupid yusha!
"Unck Sesshru!" lol...good chapter.
lmao kids♥
I'm very glad to see them trying to build their relationship into something good.
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