I loooooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ittttttttttttttttttttttt !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i haven't read a real good fanfiction for a damn long time, and gosh this is one great fanfiction !
I love it just way tooo much !
You're the best advi-sama !
by chap 28, i love the chatbox most :
Advi: Ooh…I can’t wait for the next chappie!
Inuyasha: You’re the author…you already know what’s going to happen…
Advi: Yeah…but I still can’t wait for it…My first big battle…
Inuyasha: So what?
Advi: Inuyasha…you’re supposed to be happy as well, since you’re actually going to do a lot of fighting.
Inuyasha: You…mean…I finally get to fight for real?
Advi: Uh huh
Inuyasha: YES! I FINALLY GET TO KICK SESSHOUMARU’S ASS!
Advi: Noooo….you finally get to kick hog ass! (stares at Inuyasha)
Inuyasha: err…yeah…hog ass…ya-hoo
you should have let sesshoumaru-sama stare at him too !
Serena (Chapter 28) - Sun 20 Jun 2010
loved it! please update soon!
Kiyanae (Chapter 28) - Sat 19 Jun 2010
Hey Advi,
This is a totally awesome story so far. but you put this chappie up twice on the one page.
other than that. I LOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!
jojo661538 (Chapter 28) - Sat 19 Jun 2010
no seriously this is a great story keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^
REDWOLF (Chapter 28) - Sat 19 Jun 2010
Hojo was an ass. I am thinking something isn't right about Hojo. Great chapter!
Kendal (Chapter 27) - Sat 19 Jun 2010
Great Story! I read it once on fanfiction.net and really enjoyed it. I was quite saddened to see it go. Your story was one of the few that I could read over and over again.
jojo661538 (Chapter 13) - Sat 19 Jun 2010
who ever sent you that hate mail is an imbicile not only are your stories great but this site is sesshoumaru+kagome really what the hell were they doing anyways keep up the great work dont let as* holes get to you ^_^
I am really enjoying this story. At first i thought it was similar to many of those that i've read but i'm seeing the difference now. I like it. I can't wait for Sesshoumaru and Kagome to finally be together ^_^, lol. I did notice that with the coin issue, there is the opening for a side story or a side plot or something so i hope that you develop it or at least close off the thought eventually. If it's one thing i dislike is for an author to open a thought and leave it hanging. Soo, great job thus far, I definately look forward to the next chaper...until then.
Keeo on writing and i'll keep on reading
MUA (Most Unlikely Angel) 0:)
Serena (Chapter 25) - Wed 16 Jun 2010
loved it! please update soon!
Silhouette (Chapter 24) - Tue 15 Jun 2010
OMG I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR!!!!!! It`s awesome one of the best shesshoumaru X kagome stories I`ve ever read!!!!! You really have a talent for writing, keep it up can`t wait for the next chapter ^_^
Serena (Chapter 23) - Mon 14 Jun 2010
loved it! what does 'ana-ta' mean? please update soon!
I like what you updated so far, but there's a couple of things that I've noticed. In chapter 17, when Sesshomaru introduced Kagome as his mate to Baron Nobuhiro and Saya, I think you meant to write "YOU CHOOSE A HUMAN OVER ME?!" instead of "...ME OVER A HUMAN?!". I've also noticed the same thing where Kikyou is confronted by Inuyasha and at one point says, "Then you have finally chosen me over my reincarnation?", when it should be, "Then you have finally chosen my reincarnation over me?". It's very good overall and I look forward to the next chapter (I actually read all 23 chapters, btw).
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