I love that Sesshoumaru is cursing. It's too cute and OCC!
I love your story, it's the second time I'm reading it!!!I love your version of the characters and the respect you have for them. Honestly, I secretly wished you had made Hojo more presistant. It just would have been fun to see Sess put him more in his place, but it was a great surprise that he apologised, even though I have read your story on another site it's like I reading it for the first time. You are an excellent writer, your story flows the plot is awesome and as I said eariler your version of the characters are excellent, I've enjoyed getting to konw them. My fave part so far is when Inu refused to go home because he was bored.
I'm not much of a reviewer myself, I sometimes review when a story is finished or I have time, or a specific need to such as now. Ummmh, I didn't read the hateful review that was left for you, it was taken down before I could, but from what I'm reading about it, I don't have to actually read it to understand that it was hateful, spiteful and hurtful. I don't understand people like that. I've read some awful stories and reviewed them but never have I been hateful or hurtful, I've been honest and I usually send the review through private message not to embarass the writer. I have never told anyone not to write, no matter how bad the story is, (I have read some stories that I couldn't read past the first chapter) I try to encourage them to continue to write that is the only way you are going to improve. There is no possible reason to flame someone elses work or anything they do, there are ways to express somthing to someone with out being destructive, there is absolutely no reason to do such a thing. How dare people do that to someone. Mostly it's jealousy and some people are just plain spiteful! Anyway, I felt I should congradulate you! You did not let them stop you from writing your stories, and never let anyone stop you from doing what you enjoy! Never let anyone get you down! If you do, they won, your above people like that always! This will not be your first awful flame sadly there are people out there who just seem to have made it a hobby to hurt others, you have to stand up and believe in what you do and yourself and more on, ignoring them. Your an excellent writer, seem to be a great person and don't let anyone change that, some people are just unhappy with themselves and the only way they can be happy is to bring someone down. I believe I heard of this person devils advocate before, and that poor, poor, sad person has nothing better going on in their life so that person has to do their best to try to bring others down and I'm afraid if they do not change they will lead an incrediably unhappy life and bring unhappy children into the world if they live that long, seriously they will make the mistake and mess with the wrong person who is not above kicking the $%#% out of them. I'm above name calling, besides there are no names to fit this persons behavior and attitude, this person is just sad and pathetic and most likely lonely and wishes he or she has your incrediable talent imagination and bravery. (I'm to much of a chicken to post my stories)
I'm sure I've reviewed your story on another site, I've read this one before and am very much enjoying reading it again! Your incrediable and I truly enjoy your work, keep it up and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!
TO Devil's Advocate: I'm graduating soon with a degress in psychopsychology, art therapy, I will take you on as my first patient for free if you like, Also, if I were you I would change my name, you are not close to being a devils advocate more like LONELY WITHOUT A CLUE. I've met the devil and he wouldn't hire you to wash his dog.
I had to leave that little message. Well you hang in there and WRITE ON!
Much love
InuAngel
haruhi (Chapter 36) - Tue 29 Jun 2010
wow that was an awesome chap.please keep writing.i'd like 2 read more about kagome and sesshomaru's love
First off, sorry someone flamed you. Flames are not tolerated here. I don't know how people get off being rude. Don't like it, don't read it, I always say. The author Kagome got a flame too, I wonder if it was the same flamer.
Anyways, regarding this chapter: @__@ that was a LOT of sex. That would make them very messy wouldn't it? lol! I think they need a smexy shower time now. Can't wait to read more!! Thanks!!
Serena (Chapter 36) - Mon 28 Jun 2010
loved it! don't worry about any flames, just keep on writing your stories. please update soon!
Elwina (Chapter 36) - Mon 28 Jun 2010
I'm glad to be of help advi. Now i have a favour for you to do...
don't give up even if someone says bad thing like SOMEONE did, coz you have to know that there are lots of us who loves and appreciate your stories...
so...ganbate advi-sensei-sama !
Whitemoon (Chapter 36) - Mon 28 Jun 2010
Who the hell is The Devil's Advocate anyway? How dare he/she critic your story. BAKA
fan fiction is based of your imagination that yourself create. What purpose that he/she give bad comment and say that like he/she owned dokuga?
Dokuga is for everyone not for IDIOT that think he/she own it. VERY IDIOTIC PERSON
If that person want to critic the story don't give comment that make writer feel low and embarrassed her, give a good advice NOT bloody hell badmouth her.
Do not worry Advi you better ignore that The Devil's Advocate, after all he/she is IDIOT that cannot spell LITERATURE very well
I LOVE YOUR STORY VERY MUCH. Please updated next chapter quickly I want to know what happen next
If that bastard The Devil's Advocate give you bad comment again, IGNORE it after all you have more loyal reader that support for you story (like me).
Ignore that insignificant bastard The Devil's Advocate after all he/she only want you to fail (the name that he/she give is like him is really idiot, evil and bastard) (>_<)
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