I've only just read the prologue and I am greatly enjoying it, but I had one small stylistic suggestion. A lot of people who read Inuyasha fanfiction are aware of what most of the Japanese terms you've used mean. It's a little distracting to include the English meaning in parentheses (you might as well just use English in that case). If you're concerned about people not knowing the words, put a small note at the top that you've included a small translation section at the end of the chapter, and list your translations there. In general though, most people don't even include that, and people tend to understand it. Either way, I will continue reading and I am already enjoying it. Great job!

this was a very well done story. I liked your character dynamics very much. It seems like there should be a sequel...ne? One where Sess and Kags get together (and all their romantic glory... ^__^) and where it finishes the jewel, Etc. The end of the epilogue seems like you were in a rush to finish. It almost jumps on ya while you are reading it. There are a lot of un-finished business. Are you planning a sequel? I believe that continuing on with this story would be worth the epic proportion of its size. It could be interesting to see these characters grow more with added dangers... like sess and kouga fighting over Kags.. or some such thing. Anyhoo.. it was just a sugestion. I really like this story though. Ja Ne!