I bsolutely adore your writing, and I've been following your story for a while. You never dissapoint when the chapters come out, they are always very thought out, long, and immensely enjoyable to read. :3 If I could patent anything, I think I'd want Jiji's shit-eating grin to add to my smirk. Ah, the perfect arsenal.... Please update soon, and thankyou for the chpter!
Oh, and is kagome practicing the enhanced smell and hearing? Because it doesn't really specify after she told Shippo she hadn't got it to work yet. I assumed she was though...
Also, she is storing the youki of the food she eats right? Alongside her reiki, so is it still accumulating, or does she use it sometimes without knowing? Like when she's handling a demonic weapon? She depletes her energy stores by increasing her speed, but could she use her youki (well...not hers....yet) to do that? Or does she not know how yet, She's not aware of it but maybe subconsciously? ah, sorry for the million questions. Shutting up now. Thnx for updating!
Fantastic!! I love this story!! I love the way you've written Kagome's character. Her attitude and her strength make this story a fun and compelling read! I can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's first reaction to her. Question will Kagome ever take off the seals? I can imagine her power is an amazing site to behold. And will we see Jiji again I love that demon. He is one of my very favorite original characters!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
mihara_wolf (Chapter 9) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
well i am very much enjoying this story and i hope that you update soon
i'm just waiting for sesshomaru to see what has happened to our favorite miko/monk
continue until the very end
Mihara_Wolf
As usual, excellent chapter!!! I'm really enjoying your fic you seem to be having fun with it and that makes it fun to read. I'm glad Kagome didn't go back, but it would have been interesting to see Inuyasha's reaction to seeing her again. I'm guessing they will meet after she gets to know Sesshomaru, boy will he be pissed if that's the case. As usual you've got me wanting more! I love the scene between her and Shippou and how she took the news of the demon food. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm glad she got to see Sango and Miroku again, will they decide to leave the group as well? Will it be Sesshomaru that continues her training? I can't wait to find out, excellent eork!!!
Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
this is a really great story that i love and like a lot since i first started reading it your a very great author who wrote this very great and wonderful story.
My dear, your story is simply marvelous!!! You are very ingeniuous; this story is both unique and splendly written!
I do hope you allow Kagome to become more feminine, though. It's a bit strange picturing her otherwise... and when does this become a Kag/Sess fic?
I am looking forward to the next chaper of this story - brava!
~Sandreline
MLMonty (Chapter 9) - Thu 08 Oct 2009
Wonderful chapter lots of information and stuff happening. Not to mention nice and long ;)
stars (Chapter 9) - Wed 07 Oct 2009
please updata
Yaaaaay!!!!!!!!
Wolfdoodler (Chapter 9) - Tue 06 Oct 2009
Oh my goodness you need to write more of this soon.
I mean it.
Seriously do it.
I mean, you came up with a plot that makes sense and doesn't have Kagome becoming INSTAPOWERFULLLLL and suddenly knowing everything there is to know in the world. These kinds of stories are rare to find, especially ones as well written as this. I certainly didn't expect Miroku and Sango to find Kagome so soon, or for it to not be a gush fest of sappy reunion.
Me likey.
That was awesome! “Dinner yesterday wasn’t chicken after all, was it?” Lolz.
Aw this chapter was sweet. Poor Sango though.
sunset in love (Chapter 9) - Tue 06 Oct 2009
the plot is exciting silverchan, but if you may, please consider kaggie being a 'girl'? i love the way the fic is written, but i would loved it even more if she's a 'girl who wears beautiful, cute girl dresses and long silky black wavy hair, (in fact that's her trademark in the anime, movies as well as in the manga)' and not a 'monk', kaggie is beautiful girl, with motherly instinct, albeit temperamental, she is a kind person with big heart... and being so, she's a 'beautiful girl' whom we loved so much, and i believe, she should make a wonderful lady. making her a little mischievious won;t affect her character too much, but turning her into a monk is truly 'discomfiting', in fact, she's not even a real miko!
At least Miroku and Sango know she is alive now. And she got her modified weapon from JiJi. Can't wait to see what happens when Inu sees her again and how she retrieves the shards in the Southwest. Keep up the great work!
| love the story hope to see more
| awesome chapter... what cracked me up was the fight w/ Sesshoumaru, when he threw Inuyasha into a tree, and the first thing Miroku did was pray for the tree. XD Inuyasha can take care of himself, but that poor tree...
anywho, poor Kagome!!! Don't fall into their hatred trap, just remember Sin and Shippo and Jii, and you might make it out alive!
MLMonty (Chapter 8) - Thu 10 Sep 2009
| Well her time at the Temple was certainly interesting! You did very well and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
soulNchantress (Chapter 8) - Wed 09 Sep 2009
| Awesome story. I believe I know where it's going, for one subject, anyway. Let's see....Miko and Monks can't heal...Humans can't heal....,but Kagome does. Now, at the end of chapter 8 her voice is a little off. I wonder if she will end up losing it?
I just love this story. It flows for me. I get so lost in reading it that I can easily believe 8 months passing.
Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more.
| Wow! You have really outdone yourself this time. I thoroughly loved how Kagome kept the monks on their toes especially when she tried to escape. I'm glad that she was able to warm up to all the monks and kuro-chan. I am very proud of all the progress that Kagome has made in becoming a warrior monk while maintaining her own ideals about demons. I wonder how surprised Jiji, Shippou and Sin will be when they see the new and improved Kagome. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
| Hummm, Kagome's a.....monk. Very interesting story! I'm thoroughly enjoying it.
| I loved it too... and I can well appreciate how difficult it must have been, but it turned out so beautifully!! From the escape attempts, to communicating with Shippo and Jiji, to taking Kuro out to play, it was all so well-done and descriptive, I could practically SEE the action. Especially in the "test" by the monks. You have a knack for writing action scenes, that's for sure! This story is progressing so nicely, and you give us such great, wonderfully huge chunks at a time... it's definitely one of my favorites!! Never fear, even if I don't always review each chapter, I am following this story diligently. It's one of the few things that is keeping me from going totally bonkers from Real Life - thank you so much for this terrific escape from reality this evening!!! :-) ~~Wiccan~~
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