That was a considerate change you made. Thank you for explaining.
I bet it would've made Kagome feel so much more at ease if one of the twins made a blunder by addressing her as cousin. Although, it may also have made things worse for her by making her think Sesshomaru was using her. I think the twins will be a nice ice breaker for them.
Also, friend - keep in mind, you cannot, nor should you strive to please everyone. Your AN irritated me a little, because this is YOUR story. One person may be uncomfortable with polygamous or polyamorous relationships but then someone else may come along and tell you they are offended that you don't support it. You can't please everyone. So, at least with the things YOU create, you should always strive to please yourself. It makes me sad to see you change your storyline simply because you want to avoid offending a reader - someone will always be offended, regardless.
Go big or go home, right? The readers who love your work will stay. And regardless of what choices you make for your story - you have my support either way! *air fist bump*
You are so thoughtful. Part of me wants to say "write what makes YOU happy", but I also respect that you are happy when your readers are happy, also. I support whatever way you want to go with it, and will continue to enjoy your stories which ever you decide, now or in the future. Keep being awesome.
Anonymous (Chapter 59) - Mon 17 Oct 2022
Mabushii!
Perdón pero me recordaste a Sunako de the wallflower.
Pobre Kag.
Y parece que por ahorita nadie se interesa en nuestra pequeña guerrera.
Lastima . Yo quería ver a un Sesshomaru celosíto.
I already love the twins.... It's good you changed the the original from both twins to one being mated that way it gives for a reason for Sesshomaru to visit.... lol I wonder what the twins will think of Kagome once they learn she's a miko what will the family think?
Oh no!! Poor Kagome! A lot just happened in a short amount of time but you got this gil. And atleast they seem kind.
I just read the last few chapters all together. Poor Kagome, all the family drama whirling around her must have made her head spin. They are quite the family dynamic. I think I'm understanding part of why Seeshomaru left. His sensibilities are a bit more reserved than his extended family. members.
She's such a perv lmao Miroku would be proud
In regard to your AN, it's interesting, and perfectly apt, that you refer to her as 'warrior' because Miko back in the olden days, as you say, were known as warriors. Over time it shifted and their roles became different, maybe more mundane, but for a long while miko were venerated as warriors. So, well done in your choosing!!
Also, I won't say poor Kagome for the first impression, because really it's those types of first impressions are the ones people remember and can look back on fondly. She's lovable. All will be swell.
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