Spectacular lemon

You actually did a good job at keeping tire to his character whilst having him talk. I read the A/N

I really enjoyed this story. Even though there were hardship , it didn’t take away from the quality of the story. I’d love to see what happens next in their lives. it Would be interesting to see how Sesshomaru first visit to the future goes. And it would be awesome to watch as Kagomes child grows up. I hope you make a sequel!

Great! I am eager for more :-)

Why with the cliffhangers . You're the worst  And by that I mean you're the best. I would love to see the futures reaction to them  and his reaction to the future. Poor hojo! What will he think ? ????

Phew! I'm so glad it's a happy ending! 

Kagome and Sess get to be together and happy! Yay!!

Touran finally got a loyal mate, Inuyasha gets respect, and Miroku gets to make more kids XD Glad to see that Shippo and Rin are still alive and well with their own soon to be teenage angst (poor Sess). I loved how of course Kouga's daughter was all over Hansumo XD good luck there. 

It was fun seeing how much your writing has grown so quickly and able to keep the story on tract. Can't wait to see what you come up with in the future :D 

I’m glad they got back together. Every relationship has its problems, it’s getting passed them that make love worthwhile.

Too fast. I'm gonna need an epilogue. I have questions .How come nobody picked up the baby? He was crying and no one seemed to care. Also what the baby's name. Lastly, weren't Sess and Kag thinking about a marriage ceremony between them at Inuyasha wedding? One  more, is Sesshoumaru gonna mate her or what? Thanks for updating.

I can honestly say that I do not like how this is proceeding. Not hating, just giving my feedback. Kagome has some nerve that makes me want to punch her in the face. She the future she lives in could be changed by working with him. If she has so much power, she could remove anybody if the time came for that, even by his side.

Definitely enjoyed the talk with Touran and her realizing she deserved so much better. The Inuyasha scene was hilariouslily shocking lol But I do admit the end scene felt a bit rushed and dramatic, I'm sorry. I completely understood what your intention for the scene was. Maybe if the baby had been kidnapped and they had to take a little time to be in the same space to find him, then that dramatic conclusion. Either way, thank you for taking the time to write an update. I hope Touran finds love now that she has been able to release Sesshomaru from her fascination. She deserves to be looked at and cherished too.

OMG!!!!  I did not see this coming. First I was angry that they wanted to kill Kagome  and Sesshomaru pup.  I cried when Kagome died. Elated when  Sesshomaru saved the day. What a wonderful chapter. I am sad for Touran. I would like to see her mate someone who loves her for her.

The fact that Sesshomaru can't even acknowledge his responsibility in all this and still blames it on Kagome shows me he isn't ready to be with her. Kagome is acting spineless and at another extreme end of the spectrum. I'm honestly sad to see these characters together. 

Damn Kagome...... you messed up twice... I mean the moment you found out that you were pregnant you should've told him.  Now it going to be even harder to get back with him and in his good grace. I'm glad she finally mastered the power. And I kind of knew she was pregnant a d that some of his power were going to be inside of his child. 

This is messy. Sesshomaru should have set Kagome down after he had talked with the tree demon Bokusenou. He left Kagome by herself to figure out how to control his demon youki. He should have known since she is human. She coudnl't handle his power alone. His pride got in the way. Three people will suffer because of him. Kagome, Touran and their pup. Sesshomaru needs to man up and do the right thing.

Also, I had a feeling Kagome got pregnant too. Time to Call Jerry or Maury

This whole story became messy. Now what if Touran becomes pregnant. N A S T Y situation.

I expected him to be angry but it seems like he’s not even listening to her. Besides inuyasha was constantly telling him to go see her but he wanted nothing to do with her. So it’s just as much his fault that he didn’t know about his son as it was hers.

I agree with many other reviewers. Yes how kagome acted was messed up but Sesshomaru knew the reason and kept it from her for a while. And on top of that he kept being intimate with her knowingly intensifying the influence his youki had. As she stated it took him a while to control that influence and she was expected to do it immediately. I think she should be done with the grovelling.

Wow.....can somebody, anybody just be in Kagome's corner for once??? Everytime you turn around my girl is being being beaten down. I get that they weren't gonna reconcile immediately (I would have bailed if that were the case), but she didn't end their relationship all by herself. She's owning up to what she's done, and Sesshomaru needs to do the same and realize you're not the first person to get your heart broken so you can actually move on. Until then, keep being miserable and bringing everyone down with you (Toran deserves better!)

Also, his west/south argument falls flat to me. It's easy to put your lands and your people above yourself as a leader, but it's much harder to do the same when you have something you want for your own and you have to balance the two. His dad failed because he rushed in without thinking and dropped absolutely everything to save Izayoi, and Sesshomaru is doing the exact opposite by tossing Kagome aside as soon as it gets too hard for him to deal with. If you actually tried to help her during her change instead of hiding behind your pride and loyalty to the west, it wouldn't have come to this. And it's absolutely maddening his head is too far up his ass to see it!!!

Now he has a child on top of that (which she and Inuyasha tried to get him to see but he was too much of an uppity bitch boy to be bothered), he put his hands on his child's mother in front of him, then dropped her on the floor and left them both. I have no patience/sympathy for deadbeats, fictional or otherwise. Kagome may still love Sesshomaru, but you can't keep trying to fix something that no longer works especially when you're trying to fix it alone. I hope that she pulls herself together, does right by her lands and her child, and stops pinning for Sesshomaru so she can learn to live without him instead of giving up everything to be by his side. Give himp chance to be in his son's life if he wants (but he better not try to take him!), and no more than that. She's been on her own for so long, it shouldn't be too hard.

Okay, rant over. Please update soon, and I'm hanging in there to see how this is going to end. Preferably with Kagome having some measure of peace and happiness after everything's she's gone through, and maybe Sesshomaru being a more than a little miserable (vindictive but you made feel this way with your awesome writing). PUntil next time, TCB!

~ punkish furball

I think Kagome is a little too OOC in this chapter. I understand that she may be the type to take the blame for most things or feel a sense of responsibility for their break up, but she is a bit too groveling. Usually she has a temper and a spark, which should have been triggered when Sesshomaru dared to lay a hand on her and accuse her of keeping his child from him when she has tried to make the effort to talk to him in the past year. Also with her sense of responsibility and selflessness, I don’t see her as the type to throw away the Southern lands for the sake of her own happiness especially when she has been working closely with them for a year (she did sacrifice part of her soul and the possibility of her life for Kikyo when she made a wish on the Shikon).

I can see Seshomaru being selfish and only caring about his heart being broken as he is new to the whole relationship thing, but he needs to get his head out of the sand. I hope someone slaps some sense into them and shows them them that they‘re both in the wrong, maybe Inuyasha.

I hope I’m not being too forward,but I hope the following happens:

Inuyasha sees Kagome crying on the floor and then discovered the hand print on her face and becomes enraged. Kagome tries to stop him, but he yells at her instead saying something along the lines of “ No! You’ve apologized enough. It wasn’t even entirely your fault. It was that pricks’ Youki that was influencing you and he didn’t even bother to stick around long enough or take any responsibility. As for the kid, you’ve tried get him to talk to you. Heck, I had to beg him to come and now he lays his f***ing hands on you and accused you of keeping his child from him. If I were you, I would have purified his ass.”

Then Inuyasha confronts Sesshomaru with a punch to his face and yells the following “ How dare you lay a hand on Kagome. Even when I thought Kikyo betrayed me in the past I’ve never layed a hand on her.”

”She kept my child from me”

“She tried to tell you about the kid, but you were busy screwing Touran and making excuses to not see her. Kagome was being a real b****, but she apologized and owned up to it when it wasn’t entirely her fault. It was your Youki screwing with her mind but you couldn’t bother to stick around long enough or make more of an effort like I did with Kikyo. You abandoned her when she needed you the most, but she‘s the one who is groveling to get you back. Kagome,the most selfless and responsible person I know, is willing to abandon her duty to the Southern lands for you. That’s how much she loves you . The way I see it, you were the one who gave up too easily and should be the one begging. Instead you layed your hand on her. If I were her, I would never forgive you. You’re not the only one hurting and you certainly ain’t the victim in this story so you better get your head out of your ass before she realizes she deserves better and moves on without you. She moved on from me and I’m sure she’ll be able to pick up the pieces and leave you behind after what you’ve done.”