Very nice start. Looking forward to reading more.
I'm struggling with kagome's behavior, but I know it is crucial to the growth of the story. I just want to slap her and tell her to wake the hell up! Although, I enjoy the story as a whole especially Sesshomaru experience behavior similar to his past self.
Please don't make kagome bad and at the same time I would like toread a hot sex scene between sesshoumaru and touran
klee (Chapter 1) - Wed 30 Oct 2019
No more love triangles please. Lol! I know cook on me is acting crazy right now but even though she admits to being aware of her changes we really don't know the full impact of his youki's influence on her. She may feel she's fully aware but not really be. I just can't see her being aware of the way she's treating humans and truly being okay with it. It's just too abrupt of her core character change. I'm actually shocked and a little disappointed that Sess was about to betray kagome with Touran. He knows kagome is being an influenced by his youki and he even talked about standing by her side to prove the strength of his love for her and the moment it gets tough he's turning to someone else. I think that would have a worst impact on kagome when she gets back to normal. Even when she initially suggested the three-way with Touran, she was already influenced by his youki. Sess has no excuse as he is of sound mind. Wasn't he the one that told koga that his indiscretions were basically excused because he and kagome we're not in an official relationship yet so how can he expect his own indiscretions to be excused regardless of their struggles right now.
Shanika (Chapter 38) - Tue 29 Oct 2019
Omg... I just cried and I never cried while reading. .... He so heartbroken. I mean he finally changed his attitude about human and start trying to build something with Kagome. Only for it to turn back towards him. He is seeing what others were seeing when he was acting just like Kagome is.. Power hungry, and thought everyone was beneath him. But one thing he didn't do was betray someone he loves and that's what Kagome is doing to him. So sad.
I love your writing. The way we feel about Kagome means that your a good writer. We are just expressing what we feel. I'm a little scared for Touran now though. If she meets with Kagome and she smells Sesshoumaru on Touran there might be blood. Or worse. I'm thinking Sesshoumaru may do what his father did if Kagome doesn't change and take two women. Thanks for the update.
Uh oh seems like Sesshomaru is having a bit of vulnerability because of what Kagome is doing. I just hope she gets herself fixed before Sesshomaru decides she isn’t worth the troubl.
Poor Sesshoumaru! Seriously, Kagome needs to realize what she's about to lose. Or will she even care? Is Sesshoumaru about to lose her completely to his youki? Hopefully, she wisens up soon, before she messes up everything.
hw (Chapter 37) - Tue 29 Oct 2019
This is a well-written story and I loved it in the beginning. But now, I don't think I can continue reading for now as it's just not enjoyable anymore. Kagome is completely unrecognizable and Sesshoumaru is a bit out of character as well although, I figured it's because he's dealing with his newfound feelings and uncertainty about Kags, he is coming off as weak. I get the reason for Kags change but the fact that she likes the change and doesn't seem at all perturbed about having a complete personality shift is just too much. Maybe I'll come back to reading once it's completed or nearly so. The writing is excellent, I just can't find reading it enjoyable at the moment.
I think Kagome is wrong that being near Sesshomaru helps keep her reiki in check, or at least underestimating how much she has changed, considering how she acted last chapter around Rin when she needed to be comforted.
I feel so bad for Sesshomaru. I get that Kagome has a reason to be behaving the way she is but it's sad to see such a loving character become so warped and knowing how much damage she is doing to Sesshomaru's new, fragile belief in love.
I've also thought about stepping away from this story a few chapters ago but it had such a strong start and I trust that this is leading to somewhere good. I may take a break and let a few chapters post before reading again though. Seeing her act in such a way with no satisfying conclusion to it is hard, at least for me, as a reader. You're a great writer and I look forward to seeing how you pan everything out in the end.
Good luck and happy writing!
Night Wraith (Chapter 37) - Tue 29 Oct 2019
I think I'm going to step away from this story for a while. I really don't like the turn of this story and I really don't care for Kagome in this instance. We all know that Sesshomaru can be a real prick at times but people do come around in the end but honestly, that was the way the character was created. Everything I liked about Kagome's character is pretty much gone.
This is no reflection to you as a writer. To make people feel powerfully about the story and the character is a sign of a good writer. The story just no longer appeals to me because you have done a great job of making Kagome unlikable.
She is playing with fire. Also I wonder if her reiki will actually purify now that the youki is trying to take over. She might not be as formidable as she thinks. Thanks for updating.
Toni (Chapter 37) - Tue 29 Oct 2019
I read your updates but I dont like the way you are taking this story.
Hope it turns out better.
Kagome cant be a sap but a hateful conniving bitch is a little much.
Hmm, so she is aware of the changes but is enjoying them? I feel like that makes her irredeemable in my eyes as a reader. It would be one thing if she was horrified how she was acting on some level, even if she couldn't control it (especially around Sesshomaru) but to basically like who she has became and only wanting to change to get back in the sack with Sesshomaru is...not a good look for her, to say the least.
I know I said Sesshomaru was starting to frustrate me too but I'm still firmly team throw the whole girl away. The Sesshomaru you've written deserves better in my mind, I don't know that my poor heart can take this angst.
Shanika (Chapter 36) - Sun 27 Oct 2019
Me and him both. I hope she does succeed
Shanika (Chapter 35) - Sun 27 Oct 2019
Oh sessohomaru..... what are you doing? You need to tell her before her behavior get any worse. And hurting Inuyasha like that... not good. Bring back my Kagome please
Mecca (Chapter 35) - Sun 27 Oct 2019
It's about to go down... if Kagome is gonna be jealous toward Rin, something definitely has got to give. I am SO OVER this shite version of Kagome, please please show us the light at the end of the tunnel!
I sense big trouble ahead. She’s only getting worse. I don’t know if ishould feel bad for her for whatever is wrong or to be angry with the way she’s acting. I can’t wait to see what happens nex!
ladyhikikomori (Chapter 35) - Sun 27 Oct 2019
Ugh, Sesshomaru you can't keep causing her to be 'sick' and then being put off for her change when you know what is causing it and continue to make it worse! I stopped liking Kagome awhile ago but now Sesshomaru is making me want to smack him upside the head so he gets a bit of sense.
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