I love the premise of this, since lots of stories have teenage Kagome traveling farther back to meet a younger Sesshomaru. It's refreshing to see a story do the exact opposite! Your five year old Kagome is adorable, too. :)
One thing you could improve on is italicizing fewer words- some of them could definitely be italicized, but overdoing it makes it kinda weird (at least for me) to read!
Keep writing though- I'm sure I'll catch up to your updates in no time.
Eva (Chapter 78) - Thu 28 Jan 2016
It's sometimes hard to remember the story takes place in the past. I was little when we had to take film in to get developed at Photo huts.
Awwww!
Yay, thanks for the update.
Nno worries! Back home with mom. Can't wait till the pictures get printed.
Mona (Chapter 76) - Wed 27 Jan 2016
Awesome!!! This is an amazing story and I cannot wait to read more of this and all of the other stories you have.
CUTE!
I can't wait for the camera to be developed!
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