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KShadeslady (Chapter 81) - Sun 31 Jan 2016

So come her archery skills! Very nice. Dad protecting his daughter by teaching her to protect herself. That's wonderful! I love the way you write. I know I'm a grammar nazi and if I see it, I will let your know. Bear/bare is one of the worst misuses I see here...A LOT! Makes me crazy! Cheers! Lovely chapter! Thanks for a smile this Sunday morning.


roberta. (Chapter 81) - Sun 31 Jan 2016

Thanks for the up date. Good to see her dad coming around.looking forward to next one.


StormieLikeWeather (Chapter 81) - Sun 31 Jan 2016

Very much enjoying where this is going! 


Mona (Chapter 81) - Sun 31 Jan 2016

Amazing, she now has her fathers blessings.  And now she has a chance to learn archery early on.  Please update again soon.


Katrina Kee (Chapter 81) - Sun 31 Jan 2016

Oh her first bow and arrow set! How adorable!!! I wonder if the arrows have suction cups on the ends. Mine did!!! This story is wonderful and Kagome as a little girl is so sweet!!! I wish somebody could draw her in a little kimono!!! I wish I could draw!!!


Eva (Chapter 81) - Sun 31 Jan 2016

Oh wow she's the cuti st little miko ever. Finally Shu is doing something Kagome can appreciate. 


julia (Chapter 81) - Sun 31 Jan 2016

amazing story


roberta. (Chapter 80) - Sat 30 Jan 2016

OK I just started your story today and reasd it through. I reviewed along the way great story. Please update soon. ( maybe another long 10 chap)


roberta. (Chapter 54) - Sat 30 Jan 2016

Thank you


roberta. (Chapter 37) - Sat 30 Jan 2016

Moms always get to the bottom of things lol


gildedglass (Chapter 80) - Sat 30 Jan 2016

That line kinda made no sense: Kagome would help anyone she thought worthy of helping? That's not particularly sweet or deserving of merit. Anyone, if they thought someone was worth saving, would save that person. If the mother had said she would save anyone, whether they were worthy of saving or not, then her calling Kagome sweet would have been justified. 

Ok, now that that's out of the way... Kudos on the rapid-fire updates, and please don't take my criticisms personally... they're meant to help. Keep on keeping on, and 

Cheers!

Stardust Miko


roberta. (Chapter 30) - Sat 30 Jan 2016

Too fuuny


MythMagykFae (Chapter 80) - Sat 30 Jan 2016

Hmmm a pictures worth a thousand words? Love the chapter, its nice to see Shu making an attempt to understand here!


KShadeslady (Chapter 80) - Sat 30 Jan 2016

Poor dad! But it looks like mom has won him over to her side. 


Sessygurl (Chapter 80) - Sat 30 Jan 2016

I wonder which photo she showed  him.


MissKatt (Chapter 80) - Sat 30 Jan 2016

Aww dads on board!


Lorena (Chapter 80) - Sat 30 Jan 2016

I know it may be irrelevant,  but I'm DYING to know which picture she made  a copy of,  was it the first pic or a candid shot Kagome perhaps took on accident~ 


Harleypool (Chapter 80) - Sat 30 Jan 2016

Typical daddy, worrying over his baby girl.


Eva (Chapter 79) - Fri 29 Jan 2016

Dad's not stupid.


MythMagykFae (Chapter 79) - Fri 29 Jan 2016

Wait he believes it now? Cool chapter!


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