That line kinda made no sense: Kagome would help anyone she thought worthy of helping? That's not particularly sweet or deserving of merit. Anyone, if they thought someone was worth saving, would save that person. If the mother had said she would save anyone, whether they were worthy of saving or not, then her calling Kagome sweet would have been justified.
Ok, now that that's out of the way... Kudos on the rapid-fire updates, and please don't take my criticisms personally... they're meant to help. Keep on keeping on, and
Cheers!
Stardust Miko
Too fuuny
Hmmm a pictures worth a thousand words? Love the chapter, its nice to see Shu making an attempt to understand here!
Poor dad! But it looks like mom has won him over to her side.
I wonder which photo she showed him.
Aww dads on board!
Lorena (Chapter 80) - Sat 30 Jan 2016
I know it may be irrelevant, but I'm DYING to know which picture she made a copy of, was it the first pic or a candid shot Kagome perhaps took on accident~
Typical daddy, worrying over his baby girl.
Eva (Chapter 79) - Fri 29 Jan 2016
Dad's not stupid.
Wait he believes it now? Cool chapter!
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