I've been working on a rather epic story for a while now but for some reason this lemon scene won't leave me alone even though its not central to the story. In fact, its more like a spin-off set after the end.
Anyway, I figured that the best way to get it out of my head was to write it out and I have. Excuse me for being such a hentai but its quite explicit (so please be over the age restriction in your area) and its my first shot at writing Sess/Kag fanfiction so please be kind. I'm usually very good with grammar and punctuation but a second set of eyes is always best when proof-readings so a beta willing to read a rather pointless lemon scene would be greatly appreciated.
It's 3576 words. I'd appreciate feedback on spelling, grammar and punctuation as well as the actual lemon. Just make sure I haven't put limbs in odd places or something like that
Also, please be aware that I use British spelling even though word likes to change my 's' to 'z' and 'ou' to 'o' e.g. colour --> color etc. Oh and Sesshoumaru has two arms in this fic since I couldn't be bothered at the moment to concentrate on him only having one arm.
Help would be greatly appreciated and I don't have any deadlines so feel free to take your time
If there are any volunteers, just send me your email and I'll send it over. Thanks!
