Reviews for Melancholy by Alon

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Debra (Chapter 9) - Thu 15 Oct 2015

I have very fond of Hiro and I'm glad you have more planed for him. So he was the jack ass that Kagome told off for breaking up with his girlfriend there. Oh boy if she actually remembers or finds out. I still hope to see her have baby of her own, one that doesn't involve her being a mistress. Hell if Hiro was older I'd pick him to be her baby's daddy.


Glxydragon (Chapter 9) - Thu 15 Oct 2015

I love that bankotsu is in the story. Please update soon!


Adomani (Chapter 8) - Thu 15 Oct 2015

I should be studying, but no, i'm here reading this chapter and needing more ):

moooreeeeeee


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

All three chapters are nice, keep it coming.


Mona (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

I think it would be great to read about Shippo coming into Kagome's life as a son, adopted or not.  Rin as well, but I don't know where she would belong since Sesshoumaru already has a kid, maybe she and Shippo come into Kagome's life at the same time.


Susy V (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

a new player to the game!! Well, there's certainly something charming about him! And as for the POV maybe Hiro! I'd love to see how he views his fellow coworkers and he's more of a unbiased opinion and new eyes! 


Niomi (Chapter 2) - Wed 14 Oct 2015
I wouldn't mind seeing Hiros perspective. I like the quiet ones. Lol How much older is Kagome? I don't want to see Kagome pregnant... That'll make their relationship even more distant. I hope you can fast track Sess s return ;p

Niomi (Chapter 2) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

Ou, I've always thought Bankotsu was the second sexiest character ;) good choice. I don't mind any ones perspective, just maybe not Kagomes since it has been mostly about her. Maybe Banks? Does he know her from before?? I can't wait to see how to works out. Girl, you're gonna have one long story lol. Id like to see Sesshomarus perspective but just a little. Hes too infuriating.


Pang Lin (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

What a beautiful story you have written! Each chapter is so bitter-sweet and delicate and leaves me feeling melancholy after each chapter. I couldn't stop reading and I'm utterly captivated by this story. Well done.

I love how realistic the plot is and how easy it is to relate - we all struggle with hard choices in life that leave us regretting past choices and thinking about the alternative outcomes or possibilities. You have taken a very sensitive and respectful approach to the characters and that has only made the story more beautiful.

I really feel the emotions and love between these two and I hope so, so much that they both will get their happy ending.

I look forward to next chapters :)

xoxo


hana sora (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

Wow, keep it coming!! But i dont want them to be just a friend. . T-T


YukiAi (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

Loving this! I wouldn't mind seeing more of Hiro's perspective. He seems very quiet yet observing. Thanks for the Update!


Blommie8 (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

Debra (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

Yay! I hope this means you are bringing in a love interest. It would be sooo... good if by the time Sesshoumaru gets to visit her she is pregnant. He did say it would be months before he made it back. I'd also like to read from Hiro's perspective. He seems to have a crush on Kagome and I'd like to see and read more of him.


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

I would like to see the perspective of Sesshy's pup and wife. I know this story focuses on Kags/Sessh but I would like to hear about them, too!

 

Oooo I wonder what's gonna happen with Banks?! She gonna hook up with him on a date or two?


Selenityhyperion (Chapter 7) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

I actually took it as he was being remorseful, too. That he regretted the time spent apart and wanted to give time back to her.

 

I like this chapter and how they interacted. Very well done!


Haven (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

Awesome chapter!!!

 


hana sora (Chapter 7) - Wed 14 Oct 2015

 

I just hope that maybe there'll be a chances for them to be happy because they are really deserve it


Blommie8 (Chapter 7) - Tue 13 Oct 2015

Mona (Chapter 7) - Tue 13 Oct 2015

I was so looking forward to a sassy Kagome.  Anyway please update soon.


rose (Chapter 7) - Tue 13 Oct 2015

next chapter please


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