Hello,
this chapter was super sweet!!! I love the overprotective and possessiv Sesshoumaru! The whole Shiro will know now, that Kagome is his, because of how often he claimed her in front of his mother!!! :D Also that he was waiting outside of the room for her was just adorable!!!
I really like that you are using terms like puppy and snout. It definitely helps the sweet factor of this story! And I also like the way you characterise Sesshoumaru's mother. She may be a strong and somewhat stubborn woman, but at the end she only thinking about her son.
You are doing a fantastic job with this story!!! Keep it coming!
I'm looking forward to see Sessoumaru's reaction, when the door will open.
I am enjoying this story very much. Thanks for sharing.
That was delightful. Winning over mother is at the top of the list, even the Great General knows this. I feel that dear Kagome will continue to charm her.
Can’t wait to read more!!!! Lol the man cub part reminded me of the Jungle Book!
Such a cute story beginning... I wonder if it'll be completed....
Really enjoying this story. Looking forward to updates.
Toni (Chapter 13) - Fri 06 Jul 2018
really enjoying your story please keep it going
Minime (Chapter 13) - Fri 06 Jul 2018
So swret and cute. Waiting for the next chapter
Great Big Awwwws...Nicely written and very well done visuals. I’m so glad you updated.
How very sweet. I’m glad that you are continuing with this lovely tale.
Can’t wait to read more!!!;)
Amber (Chapter 12) - Thu 05 Jul 2018
I LOVE THIS STORY. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
Super cute story!
Inuyaoi (Chapter 12) - Tue 03 Jul 2018
My only compliant is that there isn't more to read. This is wonderfully written and I'm quite fond of this style of writing. The dialogue is perfect. I can't believe English isn't your first tongue. Adorable story. I love this little sesshomaru.
So cute >.< Looking forward to an update.
Way! I knew you were refencing Harry Potter! ;). I liked the update and can't wait for the next update. Not sure why you were worried though, it was good!
I love it, thay are too cute awr
Denise (Chapter 11) - Sat 22 Aug 2015
Another great chapter! I like we're you are taking the story! I can't wait to see older sesshoumari! I love little sesshoumaru though. I hope there are more chapters of him. He is just adorable!!! :-)
I melt. <3
Eva (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Aug 2015
I love your Inu No Taisho. He and Sirius do have the right idea. I'm excited to hear that your storyline spans into canon and beyond Naraku's defeat. Your English is quite good, so don't worry too much about it. I've read native speakers that can't write half as well.
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