So i absolutely love this story so far! I dont normally leave a review but i relly wanted to tell you i like the story. Keep writing i cant wait to read more! :)
This story is so cute. What could be sweeter than a mini sess, and a mini kagome.
I thought it was kinda cute the way he was "inspecting" her. Can't wait to read more!
Haven (Chapter 2) - Wed 15 Jul 2015
sooo cute!! I'm sooo following this!
Adomani (Chapter 2) - Wed 15 Jul 2015
I like it, I want more of this! Keep it coming please!!!
No Uta (Chapter 2) - Wed 15 Jul 2015
Oooooh I am very much enjoying this. It does remind a story called Unspoiled, I read and fancied a year or two ago. There are obvious differences between yours and that tale of course. It has a sweet disposition which is similar. The major difference is that Kagome is also a child in your story. I am loving it so far. I fancy how inquisitive and gentle Sesshomaru is with Kagome. Well done!
I wonder what is going to happen next. This story looks intresting
Aziza (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Jul 2015
Oh this is going to be a great fic XD
Mona (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Jul 2015
I like it so far, please update soon.
Ana (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Jul 2015
I love your idea! I can't wait for the next chapter. Don't worry about the language, everything was perfectly easy to understand. (Also a not a native speaker of English)
Kae (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Jul 2015
Great start. This story seems like it will be really cute. I am intrigued. Reminds me a bit of Forthright's "Unspoiled" but with Kagome being a little girl too. Looking forward to where you take this.
Considering that English isn't your native language, I think you did an excellent job. I did notice that when describing the well you said, "the well had to be abandoned, or simply abandoned." You said the same thing twice. I'm not sure if you meant to replace one of the repeated words with another or not. Just wanted to point it out since it nearly jumped off the page at me and jerked me from total immersion in the story. Good luck with your writing!
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