Ah~ i love how you wrote the explanation of Touga and Midoriko. Of course when Sesshomaru confessed that Kagome was 'his peace' my heart melted! ^0^ very good, well done!
Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. Nice chapter, keep it coming.
What Makes A Dad
God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.
Happy Father's Day!
And so....the journey begin 0_0
TDANIEL (Chapter 6) - Mon 23 Jun 2014
HI, LOVE THE STOREY SO FAR.....HOPE SESS and kags find a way back to each other so they can live their lives together like they should have in the first place.......perhaps kags curses on the so called kami........can be used to reck all the kamis plans and also used to fight the kami and get her and anyone in that world out that she wants to help get out and perhaps she can use this curse to drain the kamis powers giving them to her instead.....and she and sesshoumaru......will become the new kami to rule in place of the true kami as his choice....to replace the false kami who took his power and cast him from the heavens..........so he set forth things into motion.........long before they betrayed him ................because he new they would betray him ............and so he sat things in motion with the help of fate only, to help him set things in motion for kags and sess to do the right things at the right time ....like the curse kags put on the kami the burning....the 2 kami feel from kagome touch of purification...... ..can be a poison curse that drains the kamis powers transfering them immediately to kagome rapidly making kagome a kami.......''.a true kami ''......... she is a true kami because she was ''' chosen''' by the ' one ' true kami ' the master and creater of the others' ......... kags and sesshoumaru were chosen by him to take over the heavens and remake things the way they should be the way he had intended.........a world where humans and youkai lived together in harmony.......keeping things peaceful and healing the earth and the beings that live on it from disease,famine,pollution,,,,,ectera...... i hope sess and kags have lots of pups i know how kags loves kids............................................................tdaniel
Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. All three chapters are nice, keep it coming.
What Makes A Dad
God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.
Happy Father's Day!
Oh wowww~
That is extreme sorrow there right now! I'm so sad they have just begun their relationship only to be torn away. Kagome and her friends too. You did well portraying the sorrow, dear friend. *pats back* well done, well done. Now you can imagine the train wreck I became while trying to write those four, five tortourous chapters in The Masked Truth. Anyways, keep up the good work!
You made me cry!!!! *sniffles* So stalking this one now. Please continue
Great chapter, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
Ana (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Jun 2014
A very good begining :D Nice work ;)
Hmmmmmm?
Where are the next two chapters that are posted on Fanfiction? LOLOLOL.
Anyways, good job :)
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Very interesting! I will be keeping my eye on this fic
What an interesting chapter, I must say! I love how you began with Kagome at the hot spring and her encounter with Sesshomaru ^_^. You had me squealing. And I noticed that Sesshomaru must be interested somewhat in Kagome. Then the fact that the Kamis conversation confirmed his interest towards Kagome. Though I am not sure yet what kind of feelings he has of Kagome....but I am sure interested in readin the next chapter!
I also loved how you've included the Kamis conversation and decision to separate Kagome and Sesshomaru from the beginning. Definitely captured my attention. I had all these ideas of what they will plan to do racing through my head!
What a wonderful and original plotline you have so far! I am truly excited for this story!
Great job Peach-chan! And thanks for telling me of this new story! ^_^.
Interesting. I would like to see more. Please update soon. :)
Roxette (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 May 2014
i'm not into tragedy, but i must confess that the story piqued my interest ...Can't wait to see the next chapters
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