*sheepish grin*
I thought Nako would still interest Sesshomaru because....HE NEVER IS INTERESTED IN OTHER PEOPLE> and when you said she reminded him of Kagome, I thought the WORST! But, nowwww I totally get that she is Kagome's ancestor~ *nervous laugh*
Really great chapter! I love the details and descriptions. It makes me feel embarrassed cause I needa start working on expanding my vocabulary and the way I describe things. I feel so, when reading your story. *sigh* better work on my writing skills. You are very good at it!
Anyways, I love the scene with Sesshomaru and his father! Ohhhhhh Touga! He is so cold sometimes and it reminds me of the older Sesshomaru! You portrayed him reallllyyyyyyyyyyyy WELL!
And the scene with Sesshomaru and Nako finding a jewel (?) to transport them to the four kamis....when you described Sesshomaru's grin.....oh my goodness! SUCH GOODNESS! So evil, yet so HOT! I thought it fit his character just well!
Wonderful job, once again! *hugs*
Eva (Chapter 19) - Sun 12 Oct 2014
I'm thrilled to see a glimpse of the world left behind. The new but hauntingly familiar face (trying to avoid spoilers) is a very nice twist.
Just getting into this. Did you know chapters 4 and 5 are the same?
Sesshomaru did seem out of character...but the words "My war had ended" made sense to me. I mean....his soul just knew. I think that justifies his attachment to Kagome. I love it! I can't wait to read the next chappie! So well done...I am sooo happy right now.
*sighhhh* The moment between Sesshomaru and Kagome was beautiful.... when she said she could see past his mask and Gin had missed it....that was....was....just....so beautiful! Well written.
And of COURSE you had me laughing when I read "Seiko does not like dogs. If you wish to look around this place, he will watch you. Do you have any complaints?"
PUHAHAHAHAHAHHAA *rolls around on the floor laughing*
GYAHHHHHH! beyond my expectations...beyoooonnnnddddd! OVVERRR the DAMN RAINBOW! Who would have guessed his BEAST would take over and be so GENTLE!!! AHAHHHHHHH the almighty Sesshomaruuuuuuuu! Well...I guess cause he is younger...his control is a little less. Anyways....I LOVE this GIN! But...Sesshomaru is still first in my heart. I think you've developed Gin's character very well. So well it broke my heart when I heard his past and how he lived before he met Kagome. My goodness...you have talent.
Ahhhh~ that hurt my heart. I could feel the longing Kagome had. Through this chapter I was able to see Kagome's pure heart as well...something that makes Kagome so unique. Her heart for the hanyous was beautiful. Great job on portraying that. Also...the second Sesshomaru FELT something even though he knew nothing of her! Great start! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Ah~ togua is too harsh towards his son. Pain pain.
Those evil kami's are making me so mad. I want them dead. NOW. Go Sesshomaru and show them your wrath! Don't spare a single kami!
A young Sesshomaru! HOT!
Peach-chan! *hugs* well done!
Two worlds....this story...the more I read it...the more it amazes me that such an original and interesting plot could be written!
I'm sure some people were confused with the new introduction of Sesshomaru. *giggles* but I know~ *lalalalala dances around throwing confeti*
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