Gin is...

I hate that guy. He's like, Naraku rank on my evil guys I hate scale. Seriously.  I hate him way more than the OC. The OC doesn't even compare!

Here's to anticipating their deaths!

Nice, keep it coming.

I like that this fic has some darkness to it.  Too many stories re unrealistically happy, not that its always bad, but sometimes it's nice to have a touch of reality to things

Very nice.

Not nice, but nice.

I can't wait for Sesshomaru to get there.

He needs to hurry his butt up and slaughter all those men.

Save Kagome, keep it coming.

Can't wait for the next update!

Snap...

Snap.

This is going to be bad, but it's getting so good!

Who's voice is that?

Is it the voice of someone I love?

There is going to be talk, keep it coming.

Uh oh!

There's going to be a talk!

Crying!

That's no good,

Ah! I've got goosebumps! This is wonderful- I love how tense the narrative became when hiding from the men. I could clearly see it in my mind's eye and I wish that I could've seen Kagome's 'purity-fuelled sonic-boom'... I'm sure it would've been AWESOME! 

Yay for caring Rin! Yay for fast Sesshoumaru and a huge YAY for brave Kagome! (LOL)

I'm enjoying this a lot, and I cannot wait for more *waits impatiently* 

Save Kagome indeed, keep it coming.

YES!!

DEATH TO GIN AND KINTARO!!!!

DIE BLOODY PAINFUL SLOW TORTUROUS DEATHS YOU TWO FOOLS!!!

I'm grinding my teeth here.

Hurry up Sesshomaru!

Oh snap.

Sesshomaru is going to slaughter them.

She's glowing! 

Yeah!

Watch out man!

She's going to get you!

I have loved Rin in every single fanfiction I have read. This is the first one where the child is annoying me. She is being spoiled and she had yet to be disciplined for her thoughtless actions. Asdfghjkl. That being said, even if I do not enkoy your portrayal of Rin and the other characters, I do like your writing style.

Liking it, keep it coming.