This chapter is my favorite ever! I always love whenever Kagome takes charge and tells people what to do. This rocks!

Zap him Kagome!  He deserves more zaps!

Zap him Kagome!  He deserves more zaps!

This story is absolutely enthralling! I adore the banter between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, and Rin's manipulation of everyone around her is so cunning! The plot (although I have encountered 'Rin becoming a woman and Kagome being recruited' plots before) is executed so masterfully, that it feels like an entirely original idea. Although the chapters are short drabbles, it just adds to the excitement; so much happening in so very few words. You have talent and I hope you update soon :) 

I thought Sesshomaru was going to apologize and suddenly he want to investigate, what an idiot. Keep it coming.

Uh oh...

Is it just me, or is Kagome's conversation about boys and men and womanhood still lingering in a certain daiyoukai's mind?

Even if that conversation isn't in his head...

I KNEW THERE WAS A REASON I DIDN'T LIKE THE OC!!!

What reason was just recently revealed, you might ask?

Well, there wasn't a reason. But I felt like hating him more than usual with a justification,  so...

Looking forward to more updates soon!

Ja!

Rin... Sesshomaru,  apologize? I mean, I make him a apologize all the time to Kagome,  but he's already in love with her by then!

Poor Kagome. 

Shedoesn't deserve this! Why can't she ever escape from her kidnappers? Where's Inuyasha when you need him?

I'm glad you posted this story on dokuga, so can I leave more reviews like I do on ffnet, this story is amazing. Welcome to dokuga Pandapower.

Oh how sweet for Rin to have a demon who listens to her like that! Every other story I have read has demons who practically pick on Rin or ignore her mainly if they are not ordered to take care of her by Sessy. Please continue the story!

Okay, so I didn't review any of the other chapters, and I know I can't stand when other people do that to me, so I'm sorry.

I have no excuse except that I'm unfailingly lazy.

Anyway...

I love your story so much.

I love the Shippo action and the Rin action and Sesshomaru is an in0character jerk, though that's to be expected.

I love Kagome and the way you potray her.

You already know I hate the OC, and that's because he's an idiot who deserves to have Kagome castrate him before purifying him from the inside out, but...

You know.

I love this story and I can honestly say that I can't wait for more.

And this time, I promise that I'll review every chapter you post, whether to simply say that I hate the OC (who isn't worth of being called by his name) or to say something that is actually relevant to what you wrote.

Ja!

I hate this guy.