I love this.i love dark angst stories hehehe. I hip pre or gets worst for kagome. Make the first pup still born.destroy her. Make sesshy torture her emotionally every day

Looks like he's got her all "collared up" and ready to spend her life as his property.  Wow...this will be interesting to see them come back from this.  Very nicely done, and thanks for the double update!!

Holy shit your skills improved fast! You had to have been typing furiously! I approve whole-heartedly! Go you so hard!

Wow, I guess he takes what he wants.  Poor Kagome.  Great chapater.

Smooth, Sesshoumaru!!! Congrats!

Gee... I hope they find love soon.

Aaaah, faster................. More, uh... more please.......!!

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Lol, just kidding. I was begging for you to update faster, not THAT.

Well, well, he actually did it.  Poor Kags doesn't know what she's in for.  Very nice.

Alright.  Let's hope he does take this action he is thinking of in the next chapter!

The suspense is terrible.  Onward to the next chapter.

Sesshomaru is quite fixated.  Very nice build up of his tension and frustration.  On to the next!

YAY! I like that paragraph you put thar. Thanks for sharing so quickly!

Not sure if I've review this or not, but I am re-reading to get reaquainted with this fic.  So anyway, nice start.  I like the layout of the story and the reluctance in Sesshomaru's attraction for Kagome.  I also like that she is already thinking of Inuyasha, which opens things up for a struggle to pull her to the other brother's way.  We'll see where this goes!

Ah! Why haven't you updated? This makes me so... so very sad! Please at least update this chapter... or the next one. If you're having trouble writting the rather dark lemon that is sure to be coming (if you update at all, that is.) I'm more than willing to lend a hand. Please? 

Hi!

hope to be able to read an update from your story, it is very interesting !

Wow! Sessy is in a dark place here! I hope things look up for him and Kags! I do not want her hurt! Please continue the story!

And his obsession comes to a head!  Can't wait to see what he has planned, and how you depict it!

Wow, things are getting serious.  Sesshomaru is gonna make his move!  Very exciting!

New chapter please

New chapter please

Both chapters are great, keep it coming.

Great story is so obsessed with Kagome it's so creepy, keep it coming.