I loved it :D
and the fact that she is paying sess the best treatment ever , its awsome!
It has been a long time, since i read a story with rape so well structered! Most of the times kags is manly a sobing victime!
Thank you for charing with us <3
Next, keep it coming.
Great chapters, keep it coming.
Whoa! What an amazing wonderful and intruging story! Anticipate more chapters in the near by future. Alright thankyou for your hard work. Iam going to reread this wonderful story.
smcandy (Chapter 11) - Mon 03 Mar 2014
You would leave it at a cliff hanger there. Please update longer chapters in the future. I’m loving this story so far.
Sincerely,
Authoress smcandy
Sesshoumaru is a cold hearted bastard isnt he?
Lovely update. I wonder if kagomr will get her revenge hehehe
Oh now you know you have to update soon right? This has gotten really good.
Phyllis (Chapter 9) - Wed 29 Jan 2014
Wow, I don't think that's good, Kagome turning to ice. I hope something happens to thaw her out soon. Sesshomaru may have messed up royally. I wonder what her friends' reactions will be. Great chapter!
smcandy (Chapter 10) - Wed 29 Jan 2014
Um there is problem here. Chapters 10 and 11 do not show anything. Are you sure you updated the drafts?
I love to read more since you made a triple update but I canot read the chapters.
Sincerely,
Authoress smcandy
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
Please kill off the baby.still born. I love dark angst. I want both of them broken.
smcandy (Chapter 8) - Tue 28 Jan 2014
I’ve been slow in review the story thus far but now I have to put my two cents in. So far the way you are portraying Sesshomaru is not bad Iy to a degree but what I think a lot of fans tend to forget about Sees is that before he become an antihero in the series he start out in few episodes and in one later on in the final act as villain for Inuyasha.
Good way of showing that dark side of him still lingering if you ever need tips and suggestions for future chapters down the road do not be afraid to messaging me. Not many good dark fictions of s/k. I see much on the net or on this website.
Keep up the good work my friend bring on more updates and longer chapters in the future.
Sincerely,
Authoress smcandy
Nice, poor Kagome. Turning to ice beneath Sesshoumaru's fingers.
Phyllis (Chapter 8) - Mon 27 Jan 2014
Well that was interesting. Kagome is trying to shield herself from Sesshomaru, if only mentally. I thought it was working at first, but I would break too if I found out I was pregnant. Good luck to Kags. Good chapter.
I think it's time to make Sesshoumaru suffer now. I mean why let him have his way so easily? He's gonna have to earn hell of a lot more to win Kagome. Can't wait for more ;)
Thanks for the update. Sesshy is so cruelhahaha. I hope we can get more angst. Maybe kill off the first pup before fluffy moments
I love your creativity and describing abilities. Looking forward to new chapters.
very nice the story continue please
Oh snap! This is awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next! :P
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