~~Ooo I usually don't care for fics where Kags finds out she's really a demon, but I find I like yours! ^_^ The way it's written gives it a believable quality and it's not overdone like so many others. :) Keep it up, looking forward to more!
like it a ton
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
Maryssa (Chapter 2) - Mon 24 Sep 2012
how did she become demon and wat kind of demon is she and how will sessy react when he finds out that kags is a demon and is she a full blood demon or a half-breed?
I think it's worthy continuing. I like it. I'm sure things will start to speed up as the story progresses.
Vel (Chapter 2) - Mon 24 Sep 2012
This story has great promise, so keep going! One thing I will recommend is possibly getting a beta, since there are a few minor errors here and there that one could pick up and it often helps the low of your story, in my opinion. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to a future update!
katrina (Chapter 2) - Mon 24 Sep 2012
Greetings! First and foremost, i wanted to thank you on taking the plunge and sharing your imagination's creation with us! And i have proof that you should continue this story: I made a Dokuga account just so I can encourage you to keep going ^___^
Sounds cool so far.
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