grr, I hope thay Jyunchi guy really gets what coming to him!
Poor sango! That part made me cry D:
Good chapter though! Update soon!
Mirae (Chapter 15) - Thu 29 Nov 2012
Gaw! Sessh has a baby now? Well that sort of sucks. So is Kagome sleeping with Jyunchi now? I sure hope not!! I love this story, please keep writing!
Misha (Chapter 14) - Mon 12 Nov 2012
Love this story please update soon.
alivia (Chapter 14) - Sun 11 Nov 2012
Continue please O.o
YangSjie (Chapter 2) - Sun 11 Nov 2012
Ooh, Sesshoumaru being as seductive and irresistible as ever~ One thing I would like to point out is that a 'sheath' refers to something which well.. 'encases' something else. So in your description it would be "to feel her tight sheath around him", instead of "to feel her tight around his sheath".
Other than that, I wonder what will happen to Kagome now that she's found out?! Nice chapter and a nice plot you have going on here :)
I added this story tmushy favorites but never got back to it till today. This is a great au story. Your descriptions of everything are wonderful. I can't wait for the next one. Pls keep them coming.
YangSjie (Chapter 1) - Sat 10 Nov 2012
I love the plot you have going on here! After reading 'Memoirs of a Geisha' I have become intrigued by such stories, and this is a nice alternative setting for this pair.
Although there are some spelling and grammar mistakes, it is not hard to follow the story, and I am very curious as to how it will turn out in the next chapter. Especially the end was quite 'steamy', hehe.
The one thing that did annoy me a bit though, is the fact that the horse/stallion changes name halfway through the chapter: from Kuno to Kinu. Perhaps you could change it to be the same?
Keep it coming.
Pricila (Chapter 14) - Sat 10 Nov 2012
Great Chapter!
Keep it coming.
Pricila (Chapter 13) - Thu 01 Nov 2012
Oh you are doing fine! Poor Kags, just one trouble into the next! How will she get out of this mess or will Sessh come to the rescue. And Sango, what is she going to do? She can only pretend to be Kags for so long!
Andrea (Chapter 13) - Wed 31 Oct 2012
Happy Halloween! Thanks for the update; I am REALLY intrigued by this little thing between Sango and Miroku! He got a geisha pregnant? Not surprising... heh. Keep it coming!
dianne (Chapter 13) - Wed 31 Oct 2012
Oh, this chapter was so sad! I hope everything works out between sango and miroku as well as sesshomaru and kagome.
Don't worry too much about your grammer! It's not so bad that it's distracting. I think you're doing a terrific job!
Update soon!
Anonymous (Chapter 12) - Wed 24 Oct 2012
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE GIVE US MORE!!! PLEASE?
Reader in Disguise (Chapter 12) - Wed 24 Oct 2012
Sorry, sorry, sorry!
I'm sorry I didn't review before! But please don't abandon this story! It is a really good one and I love how original it is! Also, this new chapter had me floored! Sango, and now Miroku appears? That was amazing and totally unexpected! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon again, and don't abandon this story! It would be a shame to see it become part of the many wonderful stories that were abandoned and never finished in this site!
dianne (Chapter 12) - Wed 24 Oct 2012
Oooh cliffies!!! I hate'em! XD
This is a really interesting story, I'm really curious to see how it plays out.
Update soon!!
Ero (Chapter 12) - Wed 24 Oct 2012
I have been keeping track of your story. Do not despire this is a very lovely story that I would love to see to the very end. It has great potential. As for the reads and the reviews on this story prehaps there ara a lot of people like me that are silent readers. All well I hope that your midterms went well (I have midterms right now yay -.- ) and I am totally looking forwards to an update. Please don't become one of those authors that update once a month or more. Thanks. :)
~Ero
Thebard (Chapter 12) - Wed 24 Oct 2012
don't be discouraged from not a lot of reviews! You are doing an amazing job and where you are taking it is really good and killiwitness with anticipation. Keep it up!
I forgot to log in >.< my name here is thebard
Keep it coming.
Andrea (Chapter 12) - Wed 24 Oct 2012
So glad to see the update! Keep it coming :)
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