Just want to say: Thank you for updating this story.
I really like the fact that you're trying to elaborate on the plot and all the itsy bitsy details. I'm actually waiting for the chapters were Jyunchi keeps Kagome in his place. Isn't that where you're going at? Well I hope she doesn't fall in love with him...
it's already a love triangle! Well sort of. I don't think they're in love yet... i think sesshy just wants her because she refused him and doesn't try to through herself at his feet for sex.
I just can't wait!
I can't believe this story has so little reviewers. I mean it's so elaborate, and even though you do have grammar mistakes it's really good. It doesn't really take it away from the story, so don't let it discourage you! If other stories that has a million reviews on smut that really has no character development, you deserve an infinity!
Please just continue your story!
~Rancha
Keep it coming.
you must continue this, update soon please o.o (puppy eyes)
Andrea (Chapter 10) - Fri 21 Sep 2012
What a twist! I like that you brought Tsubaki into the mix, and I'm excited to see how the next few chapters play out!
Keep it coming.
Reader in Disguise (Chapter 10) - Fri 21 Sep 2012
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!! More!! I want more!! How could you leave it at that? Not fair!!! Noo, noo, nooo!! I have a feeling that Tsubaki doesnt play well with others, and the only team she will play for is the "I" team.
And a copy of Kagome? Clever! Very clever! I can't wait! Please update soon again!!
Keep it coming.
Aw, it's getting really good! :) Keep it up! I can't wait to see everything unravel.
I was thrilled to see this updated when I came across dokuga today!
Andrea (Chapter 9) - Fri 14 Sep 2012
I love you for updating so quickly. Can't wait for more! I'm nervous about seeing how all this traveling ends up on both sides XD
Reader in Disguise (Chapter 9) - Fri 14 Sep 2012
Ahhh! Another wonderful update! And yet, the plot thickens! Thank you. Please update soon again.
Sprinks (Chapter 1) - Thu 13 Sep 2012
this story is amazing. =] Update as soon as you can please!!!! :D
Keep it coming.
Kate (Chapter 8) - Wed 12 Sep 2012
Umm, shouldn't it be Hachi instead of Haichi?
Alii (Chapter 7) - Sun 19 Aug 2012
I love it! please update soon!
Keep it coming.
Nyx (Chapter 1) - Fri 17 Aug 2012
Thanks for the chapter! =)
Andrea (Chapter 7) - Fri 17 Aug 2012
Nice chapter :) Keep it coming!
Andrea (Chapter 7) - Fri 17 Aug 2012
Nice chapter :) Keep it coming!
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