It is stories like yours that makes me not regret making a Dokuga account. I absolutely loved the angst in this story, even though, at the moment its quite moderate. I'm hoping the angst will go up later in future chapters? Anyway, you have yourself another fan now, me. Lol. Thanks for writing such an enjoyable fic. Looking forward to more soon. ^^

**RubyJeweler

This is a really great story.. i loved reading this when MS put it up...and its better than the other one that i read....I am not really that good at writing storys...just check the ones i wrote....I have a beta if you want to ask her to help her name is TruGemini...she might help you...i havent updated in a while for my story angle of darkness for a while but i am slowly getting their....Keep up the great work and i will read them and review....Thanks

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!

YESSSSSS. I would just like to say thank you so much for continuing on the story, and though you may have only started (i think)...

THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR HARD WORK!! C:

As i have yet to start reading your version, i'm pretty sure you will do a magnificent job conitinuing on the story in your own style.

A decent story is always a better read than a rushed one. Time is not a necessity, so please do not be deterred or feel rushed in your progress. :P

Independence is a nice trait to have. Sometimes a BETA may alter a story significantly to what the original author had in mind, in terms of grammar, punctuation and syntax.

Eto, congratulations are also in order for being the 'ONE' continuing on MuteShadow's fanfics! :DD

+1 to gaining a new dedicated reader haha.

All the best! C:

Please please please update this story!  I've read it so many times wanting and wondering where it's going to go!  I know life gets busy, but this is such a good start, please continue, the same with "Fragile Flower!"  So good!!!!

First, I just want to say... I am SO glad that someone was able to pick up MuteShadow's unfinished stories! I was a loyal reader and was deeply saddened to see her stories not continued, so you have, basically, made my day. Second, wonderful job on the summary and the title. The very first thing I thought when I read it was something along the lines of, "Remake of Just Roomies?!" xD Which is exactly what it was! Lastly, I adored this chapter. The way the chapter began was beautiful, if not heartbreaking. I like that you're not one of those authors who'll post the ORIGINAL chapters of an unfinished story and then simply write the chapters where the original author left it at. Not to mention, I think I rather like your writing style! It's different and the descriptions were pretty fantastic. I think you've made a fan out of me with just this one chapter.

Also... Kagome tripping over a step and headbutting Kouga in the butt? Hilarious!

So, I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter to see where this goes.

I'm really intrested in this story. I love how you (or the privious author) decided not to use "okami" as Kouga's last name! That is a bit of a pet peeve of mine. (Whose last name in Japan would be "wolf" I mean really?)

Have a great week!

~~Mizuko~~

SAD AND TOUCHING, HE IS A FOOL, I HOPE SHE TORTURES HIM BACK!

I like your story so far... :) I hope you continue to update it~