Reviews for Pack by NicoRavenPen

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Shigatsu (Chapter 26) - Sat 16 Apr 2011

I really love your story. I began reading yesterday and wanted to wait until I caught up on the chapters before I left a review. Congratulations on your nomination of best portrayal Sesshoumaru. I was thinking half way through reading that I would like to nominate this story. It is very well written and draws the reader in, as well as the chapters being a decent length. I am eager for the next chapter to be posted. Thank you so much for your dedication in writing!


InuLover (Chapter 16) - Sat 16 Apr 2011

LOL! I think this was my favorite chapter! First, the puppy begging for his treat, then Kagome being tested on her skills. It was almost as if everyone had planned the whole thing! :D I really needed a good laugh, especially after the day I've had, what with the whole filing of taxes at the last minute thing. Thank you! :D


InuLover (Chapter 15) - Sat 16 Apr 2011

I'm really enjoying this wonderful story of yours; so much that I've re-read it probably about 5 or 6 times.  And, I apologize for not reviewing sooner. At least, I can't remember if I have, or not.  Anyhoo, this time I just couldn't go on without first reviewing and pointing out a glaring error that keeps occurring. It was this chapter that finally got me to mention it.  The sentence that really brought it to my attention is: "Sesshomaru looked at the tree line, his arms crossed." Now, normally, I would just ignore this, but in this story, I can't.  Especially, since at least twice you had Kagome mentioning Sesshomaru's lack of one arm to him. Both times that occurred, it seemed to be a major point in the story. After seeing this error occur several times, not just in this chapter, but in the others as well, I just couldn't let it slide any longer.  I do hope you take this as the constructive criticism it was meant as. :)  I really do love this story. It's very well written and I love how you've integrated the Inutachi with Sesshomaru's pack. You have stayed true to Kagome's character and I love seeing how Sesshomaru is opening up to Kagome.

Keep up the great writing,K? I look forward to reading more!


FoxyLadyKnight (Chapter 25) - Tue 05 Apr 2011

Love this chapter. Please hurry with the next update, I cannot wait to read it. i will be anxiously looking for it.


Roos (Chapter 25) - Fri 01 Apr 2011

Loving the story! The way Kagome dealt with Inuyasha is priceless! It is so easy to make him 'disappear' when he has done something terrible like he did and then take him out of the closet when you want another boogyman. This way is much more original and satisfying! Thank you! I love stories where Kagome and Sesshoumaru are acting like the Alpha couple they are! Have a lot of fun writing and thanks again! xxx


Jow (Chapter 25) - Fri 01 Apr 2011

This is a REALLY good story- and it doesn't progress too rapidly that makes it seem like someone presses the 'scene-skip' button on the remote control. Your tale of Kagome and Sesshoumaru has progressed quite nicely and I cannot wait to see what happens next. But for you- I will wait until your next chapter, which I hope shall be up before this year is over.

Good luck on writing/typing to both you and your muse.


Jade Lotus (Chapter 6) - Thu 31 Mar 2011

EEEEE!! I loved it when Sesshomaru brought Kagome into his room to sleep. Aww. :)


Lyssie (Chapter 25) - Mon 28 Mar 2011

This is one of my favorite stories I'm following right now. Can't wait to read more!


Elifina (Chapter 18) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

omg this was brilliant I love it! her own moko moko! such an original idea! bravo!


TKE (Chapter 25) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

I'm really enjoying this story!


Elifina (Chapter 8) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

Lol i remember reading this story on FF. glad its here now <3


Catherine (Chapter 19) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

I don't know how long it's been since you uploaded this chapter, or if anyone else has said anything about this, but you're only partially right about the omega status in wolf packs. Omegas are almost intirely outside of the pack hierarchy because they are the peace keepers. They have a very important roll in the pack so they aren't really at the bottom.


KT (Chapter 24) - Sun 20 Mar 2011

Love it! love it! love it! That chapter was so sweet!!! I can't wait to see how their relationship will progress from now on. Also what will happen with regards to inuyasha and kikyo? I eargerly await your next chapter.

Please update soon???  

 - Your most loyal fan!!!-

 


lady_myth (Chapter 24) - Fri 18 Mar 2011

Tiana,

I love this story. It is my sincere regret that I can't force you to update faster! I cannot wait to see what happens! Keep up the excellent work!


Chibi-Lover (Chapter 24) - Fri 18 Mar 2011

Yay I was so happy to see Sess. finally tell Kagome to be his mate :D and Kag. was a super hot Alpha Bitch lol but Inu deserved it T-T well continue and I can't wait for the new chapter

P.S. I can't believe Jaken has kids!!! and a mate!!! :0 :o :0 :o


FoxyLadyKnight (Chapter 24) - Thu 17 Mar 2011

OHHHH....MY.....GOD!! Do I LOVE this story. It is amazing! Goodness, do I want Sesshoujmaru to claim me. This story is so well written, I cannot wait to read the next update. Please hurry.


AzulFire (Chapter 24) - Thu 17 Mar 2011

WAAAAA WHY DID IT HAVE TO STOP THERE GRRRRR anyways awesome story i hate it too when the characters fall in love to quickly that is why i WUV your story :3 GAHHH I ALMOST DIED FROM THE CUTENESS OF IT ALL i mean sesshomaru? snuggled up with kagome, rin and shippo sleeping peacfully TOO KAWAII AND i wuved it when kagz brushed sesshys hair it was just....GAH TOO CUTE *faints from cuteness* TWAS TOTALLY SOMETING I COULD PICTURE SESSHY GETTING ANNOYED ABOUT his hair tis always so perfect is it not? and thus something he would fuss about lol, sesshy glaring at a piece of hair that threatened his perfection...*sigh* WELL...AZUL IS OUT PEACE DAWGZ MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!


cyin (Chapter 24) - Wed 16 Mar 2011

one word sums it up:

YAY!

ur so awesome ;D keep up the great work!


TKE (Chapter 24) - Wed 16 Mar 2011

Love it....can't wait for the update!!


Ashes (Chapter 24) - Wed 16 Mar 2011

Tee hee! *school girl giggles* Super cute! And now I'm craving venison jerky. lol

I love how you had Sesshoumaru add "and I yours."


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