I just realized that I haven't once commented this story. And since I am addicted to it like crack, even though I read these when you send the chapters, it's only right I start leaving a review every now and again. I r a bad shadow for not doing it before. BUT! I will remember to do it from now on, so I can crack the whip on you from email and here! Muwahahahahahaha! <3
Absolutely love the fic and please updates soon!
Thanks,
Lady Nefertiti.
Love your fic so far. So touching. Normally I don't like reading 'future' themed fics but this one just caught my attention. :) anyway, I'm saving your fic to my bookmarks so I can check when you update....please update soon!
Thanks,
Lady Nefertiti.
Eve (Chapter 11) - Wed 10 Nov 2010
Yay mommy dearest forgot to give her so called daughter that little potion. the cat is gonna be out of the bag now. haha
Love this chapter! can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!
Yay! So close to the part left off, I can't wait to find out what happens!
Dragoness (Chapter 11) - Tue 09 Nov 2010
OMG!!!! What a great chapter at first it was good but then that ending. I had to go back and read it again. I hope he realizes what's going on. I like how you did the demon birth it was a nice change of pace from the miko angle. If he knew she needed him he would be there in a heartbeat but the question is will she tell him or try to tough it out alone so as not to cause any problems with his family. Please update soon.
Oh my gosh! I know that you just updated with a new chapter a couple days ago, but I NEED you to update soon! When I started to read your fanfic, I was iffy with the wholse Kagome being the other woman, but you turned the whole situation around!! I feel so bad for Kagome and I want to see that happy ending, lol.
Great fanfic! I hope to enjoy Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's emotional rollercoaster~
Sweet Nothing (Chapter 1) - Wed 27 Oct 2010
I remember reading this story 2 years ago, but was left incomplete, i hope you finish it this time, i have always thought that this was a very good story, :)
wahooo! Another update! I love how Souta is being such an adul and helping out his sister. Its nice to see the sibling bond portrayed, and you do it so beautifully! And its nice how Kouga is already protective and attracted to Kagome, but then he isn't this clingy twerp either! I love that! And Sesshomaru is clearly putting on his intimidator face with Miroku - I cant wait to read how that plays out! ooooh the drama and angst. How I love it!
wow, I remember reading this ages ago, when I was still in high school
Will you finish it this time? I wanna know what happens after Sesshoumaru discovers Kagura to be the vindictive biotch that she is
Enter Kouga! I adore him, so I'm glad he'll be featured in this story, if even for a little bit! :)
The scene with Sesshomaru putting Rin to bed, was so sweet and touching. I just love daddys and their daughters. Very astute to have Rin thinking it was her fault that Kagome left. Kids always find a way to put the blaim on themselves for things, they are innocent of. Poor sweet little Rin. :(
Can't wait for MORE!
such a gut wretching scene! kinda makes me wanna throw up. I dont mean that in a bad way, its just that it impacted me so much to make me actually physically ill! Although it makes me want to smack Sesshomaru around. I mean to put her in a possition like that at the end of dinner so she finds out about the engagment. And how cowardly of him to give kagura the ring before talking to kagome. poor girl never even got a chance. hopefully we'll see some of his own angst over what he's put kagome through over the years.
aw so sad! You write angst so beauitfully. Although I was alittle confused at the end. I assume she was dreaming?
ShadowWalker (Chapter 5) - Sun 12 Sep 2010
in the beginning i loved your chapters. now im starting to lose interest in them. theres not enough in them, sure its decent and maybe some people love it but its starting to get boring. you need to have more in them besides on characters thoughts while your readers are wonder about the other characters. you have the makings of a really great story. this is not a flame .
Tsuki (Chapter 4) - Sat 11 Sep 2010
Wow Rin is Kagome's? That's wow lol I am at a loss for words that was such an intense and great chapter.
Amy (Chapter 4) - Fri 10 Sep 2010
MORE UPDATES! I HOPE KAGOME HAS HER BABY AND GETS AWAY!
wow... didn't see that one commin'! So Rin is Kagome and Sesshomaru's kid... talk about gut wrenching angst! Poor poor Kagome. And now she's going to again give up everything for Sesshomaru's happiness. Just. wow.
Wow! NICE twist! very much liking this so far!! ^_^
I really really love this story and where you're going with it. However; the only thing that is making it tough is the running paragraphs of conversation. I think the story would flow much better if you separated each character when they speak instead of having one paragraph where everyone speaks. Other than that I think this story is fantastic. I'm also excited that you've brought "Until Death" over...I read that forever ago on FF.Net and was always waiting for you to finish it! Happy writting and I can't wait for more.
tiana (Chapter 3) - Fri 10 Sep 2010
omg thiz iz goin good keep up the gud work and i cant wait until sesshy knoz kagome iz havin his baby lol update soon plz
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