Props to you for the cliff hanger i never saw that coming . . . THANK YOU
Wow so Kagome is the other woman?!! wow I did not expect that!!!, I mean Wow, great Twist, right now I dont' feel a bit sorry for Kagome, I mean she should have not gotten herself infolved with a married Man, and even if it is Kagrura!! and she is a bitch, it still does not make it right!!!, I hope Kagome comes to her sences and forgets about Sesshomaru, but I think not because I mean this is a Sesshomaru and Kagome story so I don't think any fo that will happen, but hey I can wish can't I, good start to a good story!!, but again, I don'g feel bad for Kags, she broght this on herslef. shame on her.
Good Twist though making Kagome the other woman insead of the other way around.
Oh and Good song it fits with the story, but I just can't stand that Song, when I first heard it I was shocked and discusted because it was talking about cheating and for me that is just s slap in the face. but the song fits perfect with your story I love it.
I hope you update.
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Megan007
Tsuki (Chapter 2) - Wed 08 Sep 2010
Wow this is awesome so far :) You are so well detailed with the way Kagome is feeling, I can't believe she is pregnant :O
I don't like the cliffy tho >:[ Update soon :P
so I almost NEVER read stories that are so early on in their conception. Usually I wait to make sure an author actually plans to finish it, or will be a reliable updater (be it every few days or every month - I just avoid stories where an author either has so many other things going on or just lacks the motivation to update at least once a month unless something unexpected comes up... because life happens and i totally understand that, but there are some who just update when the whim hits, and I avoid those.) Anyhoo, its just a personal preference of mine because when I start a story that I just adore, I get really frustrated when it isn't completed... it's like not being able to finish a sneeze. lol Anyhoo, I took a chance on this one. And I'm not entirely sure if its a blessing or a curse, that I did. A blessing - because I'm so completely in love with this story! You've managed to make a morally ambiguous situation garner sympathy and understanding quite well through the explanations of whats going on here between Sesshomaru and Kagome. Plus in spite of the unconventional situation u have the characters in, they seem to be mostly IN character, with a little twist of your own original touch, which is both reassuring and refreshing. And THANK YOU for not having Kagome some simpering little victum in this. You've made her an amazing character. A curse - because I'm so totally hooked that if you DONT finish this story or rarely update, I may start to have siezures... I REALLY hope to see more from you. You've got an amazing start here. Oh and I saw you only just joined Dokuga 11 days ago. first let me say WELCOME! I know you'll love it here. There is an amazing sense of community, and everyone kinda knows everyone either through reputation or their work. Also, as a tid bit of advice; I've found that if you update your story on a Friday or Saturday you generate quite five times as many reviews. I think midweek people are less motivated by time constraints to review. So if you dont get a lot of reviews, dont be discouraged because some people are like me and just waiting until there are more chapters, and others just haven't the time midweek to update. Keep it up sweety! Im faving this and putting it on my story alerts!
Oooh, I remember that story! I loved it so much!
I can't for it the catch up to where it was then and be able to read new chapters! ^^
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