Thanks for the update. GO GO Kagome bout time she got mean and strict with the babies.
WOW!! I just love the way you've turned Kagome into such a "take charge" type of person! And, I was so happy to see her return to her normal self, as Sango put it, when she finally told those men she was tired of their "crap". YAY! Kagome! And, yet, she still retains her optimism. I shouldn't have been surprised, though. Look who's writing this fic! Great chapter, as always, can't wait for the next. :D
BTW, how much longer before the guys return, huh??
Oh, and the answer to "It's time to punish my mate" is "THE DEMON IN ME"!
ddt73 (Chapter 20) - Tue 06 Jul 2010
Just finished catching up. The chapters about the plague were very dark indeed. Poor Kagome. :(
Hope things start looking up for her.
Good work Hair. :)
Chapter 7 of They are Pack.
I am enjoying this series immensely. I hope you're move goes as smoothly as possible.
Have a lovely week!
~~Mizuko~~
Just now had a chance to catch up, and I gotta say, these last 3 chapters were heartbreaking. I'm a nurse, and I can tell you that I probably would not have been able to do what Kagome did without totally losing it. And, I know I wouldn't have been able to go without sleep for 2 days, let alone 2 weeks. You did a beautiful job of describing each step Kagome had to take to prevent the spread of a deadly disease. Even down to the writing of each person's name, and placing the cross for patient zero. It was very well thought out, and I commend you. I found myself crying, then getting angry, then crying some more. Her compassion was obvious even as she dealt with the village trouble makers. And, I loved the way Jaken stood up to her, when everyone else ran with their tails between their legs, when she was questioned about being up so soon. This has turned into my favorite fic. Thank you!!
BTW, "They Are Pack" is the story your last quote came from. The Alpha books are also at the top of my favs list. :D
I really love your stories can't wait till next update.
This had to definitely be mentally challenging and emotionally as well. To have to endure the fear, anger, and hatred directed at her and try to make them all be at peace. I know it would be too much. Great Job!
So sad...it makes me want to cry... It was very well written...
Nyuka (Chapter 18) - Sun 13 Jun 2010
A week and a half .... my gosh I can barly stay up for 24 hours.....I do believe she will be sleeping for a week after this.... I wander how Sesshomaru is taking it...he may not sleep him self but he meditates surely he will notice that she is not sleeping for some reason...Maybe that is why Myoga is there.... Sessomaru sending him and what not..... that would make sense I think.... I wonder if Kagome will be okey after this I'm sure it's going to do a heavy blow to her.....I wonder how long it will take for her to get over it......Plz I love updates...XD.........Nyuka
Sorry I have not responded lately, been busy with the garden and children. The story is coming along great!
BTW your phrase is from Voluntary Obligation Chapter 2
"Let me save you, Kagome, come home with me. Don't force me to listen to your painful screams throughout the night, knowing I can not prevent them because you are doing them to yourself, is killing me. They echo and haunt me within my dreams until the point where I awake and find the screaming is no longer yours, but my own. Please, Kagome, please stop this before you end up killing yourself, all this stress and pain and the wounds you are inflicting on yourself can not be good for your body. You are human and humans are frail, you will not be able to sustain this for much longer. I beg you, stop this before it is too late."
Nyuka (Chapter 17) - Sun 06 Jun 2010
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa nooooo nononono I reached the end.....why the end why the end? don't let me reach the end....T-T I just spent the the good part of the last to days reading the story from the the begining of the first book cause I saw the update of the last one .....but...but it's not finished yet....T-T................Okey I admire that you could make the story move so slowly and make you feel the time it takes for them to get things done for the characters....I know I would just want to jump to the end if I where to try and write it....lol.....I feel bad for Kagome having to deal with all the ungreatful sick people....but ya know when they where asking her to share her "protection" the only thing that came to mind was her telling them "sure all you got to do is mate with a demon" with one of her scare happy smiles....lol....okey I know that probable wouldn't have turned out to great but it still made me laugh on the inside...hehe....I hope you update regularly.............Nyuka
Awww that was so sad! I was really thinking she was going to be able to save the man! It's so sad! I loved the chapter though and I can't wait until the update!
thanks for the historical accuracy! thats do depressing. but it's very good! (the funny thing is i just did a 30 min presentation of the 3 types of plague a week ago ^_^)
Good work!
this is a very morbid chapter :\ *wonders if we'll get an update on Sess and them*
Round 13 answer is "Balance". Good luck with your move, we'll all be waiting impatiently for your next update to this wonderful story. Poor Kagome having to go thru all this by herself. Thank goodness, she mated Sesshy when she did. So, how long before the guys return??
wickedone43 (Chapter 16) - Wed 28 Apr 2010
This fic is just awesome! Yes, I ready the two previous "books" for this series. I just love it!!! I understand that you will not be updating until later next month (May), but I sure hope you get some time to update sooner than that. Just hoping, no real pressure. Thank you for your entertaining works.
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