Aw, Poor Kikyo, but she'll be fine. and awsome, Diachi can transform!
the line is from: The Demon in Me by Hairann and great writing! Keep up the good work! I am still in the second story (just joined recently) but really enjoying everything!
mou i hope everything goes well ^_^
(Chapter 5) - Sat 30 Jan 2010
A nice filler chapter, as you said not much action, but each chapter dosen't need to have actions. I like how you got them getting things planned and organized.
Wispr
A good filler chapter. We find out that Daichi can transform already and knows how to hunt. Noticed one slight mistake in the chapter.
Kagome made her way over and removed the pot from the flames as she took a seat next to the fire to awake (await) her return.
Keep up the great work as usual. Can't figure out the quote. Know I read it before but can't remember where.
jojo661538 (Chapter 4) - Thu 28 Jan 2010
so far so good not that i had doubt keep up the great work ^_^
Jessica (Chapter 4) - Sat 23 Jan 2010
Aw, poor girls, I bet they're going to go crazy with worry. atleast sesshoumaru got hs moment with is son. Thankyou for your hard and good work, i look forward to reading more.
(Chapter 4) - Sat 23 Jan 2010
A very heartaching chapter, really liked how you captured the angst of the situation.
Good work.
Wispr
oh i would have thought Kagome would try to get education for her miko powers but i like all that too!
TruGemini (Chapter 4) - Sat 23 Jan 2010
So will the next chapter be focused on Sesshomaru and the guys at war? I am so excited!
I love and adore Daichi! He's soooo adorable. I would be carrying him around everyday, ALL day O.O
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Sat 16 Jan 2010
Awww, Rin called sesshy Daddy! that should so hapen more oftn!
Roos (Chapter 3) - Sat 16 Jan 2010
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw! *Melts from the cuteness* Kawaii!! Loving the story! *Bows*
What a sweet chapter! I really like Sesshomaru in this story...
That was a very sweet chapter. So, the battle is coming next right? I can't wait!
Hey, not fair! Sesshoumaru and Kagome should have been intimate, too. What if that was to be their last moment together. She would forever regret not being with him even though they're not mates yet. I was disappointed. I thought the scene with Rin was very precious.
Eriean (Chapter 3) - Sat 16 Jan 2010
~~YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~ i've been waiting for this forever!!!!!love it!
Cindy (Chapter 3) - Sat 16 Jan 2010
That one is so easy, I don't even have to look it up. That line is from "Playing Kami" which I have ready probably 4 or 5 times now. :-) Thanks!
(Chapter 3) - Sat 16 Jan 2010
A very heartwarming and yet heartaching chapter... the ending especially was a real tear jerker... good work!
Wispr
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