Haha! ThAT'S GREAT! He's going to get his mom to say yes so the dad can't say no. >D ~!
I would so do that with my parents...except it was my dad. Great job. And nice description of the people. I like how they went the back way and saw the more common things, rather than some grandness.
I started reading this story earlier, and I couldn't stop until I got to the end, only to stare and wish there was another chapter to go to. While I was reading it, a phone call I've been waiting on for two hours came, and I ignored it just to keep reading. My boss would be so happy if he knew I blew him off for fanfiction. :P
This is awesome sauce!
I've read a lot of fics where Kagome goes back further in time, and this is a very different, very fresh spin on the idea. Your portrayal of young Sesshoumaru is great too. Regal, curious, and young, he's so curious of his new exception, yet he cares for her and takes care of her.
Regarding her thoughts in chapter twelve, I wonder if her presence has anything to do with his attitude toward humans, or his choice to accept Rin's company. After all, if Kagome does affect his future, he's already known one human that cared about him without fearing him. Yet, if he does, why the sour attitude toward humanity?
This is one of my longest reviews of all time, but I'm really enjoying this and can't wait for the next installment. This is a truly excellent work!
connie (Chapter 13) - Fri 13 Nov 2009
ooh, talking to mother first i see :P
Will Kagome change Inu Papa's mind about humans? Will she pave the way for Izayoi? I love this story, younger Sess is so sweet, and noble.
Patricia (Chapter 13) - Fri 13 Nov 2009
I loved the ending, it cracked me up! going around his parents.
well if his mother dosent like cats i hope she like humans.
waiting for the next update
autumngold (Chapter 13) - Fri 13 Nov 2009
Great updates! I'm glad that Kagome realizes how much Sesshoumaru has given up to save her life. I like how Sesshoumaru was able to relax when he met with Ah Un! Can't wait for more! How will Sesshoumaru's mother react to Kagome? If she hates cats so much I can't imagine her being fond of humans.
Kanna37 (Chapter 13) - Fri 13 Nov 2009
Ooo, sneaky Sesshoumaru! That boy is too clever by half - young or not. It is interesting because you can see the progression from childhood to what he is as an adult... way too smart for anyone's good. Excellent chapter.
Amber
Haha! Awesome! Little Ah and Un are cute. Poor Sessh being all stressed. Lol I liked how Ah and Un almost plowed Kagome over.
connie (Chapter 12) - Tue 10 Nov 2009
awwh kagome :D
hmm the confrontation is coming soon :O
Oops Kagome wasn't thinking ahead :D Can't wait to read more!! :D
This has been an interesting journey so far and I can't wait to see how Kagome's presence in Sesshou's past will affect his future and Kagome's present time in Sengoku Judai. I look forward to seeing how her relationship with Sesshou and Hisoka will bloom. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
Oh my gosh, awww!!! I love this story! It's so... cute and awesome and so much fun to read! It almost automatically improves my mood. :) I honestly cannot wait to read the next chapter. You are an amazing writer. :)
Kanna37 (Chapter 12) - Tue 10 Nov 2009
And once again the formidable Forthright strikes with another gem. I am very much looking forward to finding out how this time- defying story plays out. The characterization of Sesshoumaru in this one is striking, and, at least in my mind, dead on. I wait with bated breath for the next installment... Lead on, MacDuff!
Amber
i LOVE the random superman refrence in this! >:3
wynter89 (Chapter 12) - Tue 10 Nov 2009
I love this story! Keep up the great work! I cant wait to find out what happens next!
Samantha (Chapter 12) - Tue 10 Nov 2009
OOOOH Boy this is getting too good. I hooted when I saw that this was updated! Keep them coming please I just am totally in love with this story!!!!
I have read all of your stories on Dokuga now (though I cannot recall if I reviewed each one) and I must say that this is by far my favorite. I eagerly await each installment.
I love your style of connected drabbles. It leaves much to the audience and has a simple clean feel. Each chapter is an image, a word.
Delightful lasting impressions.
As always forthright, I love your stuff!
Very well done....however, I know this is based on prompts, but part of me is going: GET ON WITH IT! As in: I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SHE GOES BACK TO THE PAST...ER FUTURE...ER...SENGOKU TIME PERIOD-THINGY!
Argh.
But I digress.
Most lovely!
WOW it makes perfect sense lmao kagome is in rins position (kinda) except sesshomaru is the one that is a little kid i get it lol i was confused what she remembered :) wonderful chapter i loved it :) well continue rightiing im off to bed night oh n update soon!
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