I really like your story. It flows really well. Message me the next time you update if it isn't too much trouble.

You cannot do this!! I demand that you post five updates at once!! Do you know the kind of hyperventilation I go through every time I see Dokuga Story Alert : Unspoiled?????????

Please, please, please, I beg youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu post more of the story! *grovels on the floor*

Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Little Sesshomaru is too cute for words. And he tries so hard!!! Awwwwwwww!!!!!! He's the most adorable thing ever!!!!! (Yeah, he'd probably dokkaso me if he ever heard me call him adorable). Your portrayal of his childhood self gives little glimpses of his personality that he retains as an adult. 

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Death by Cuteness Overload

Loved it!!Sesshomaru is soooooooo adorable!

This story is just so wonderful.  It makes me so happy every time I see a new chapter.

This story is just amazing so refreshing and orginal.  You never disapoint me with a chapter.  Each is unique and well written as the next.  I also wanted to say how clever you are for using common phrases as chapters and how they tie into each chapter.  Very neat.  Please update soon I am just dieing to read another chapter.  I must admit.......I check daily!!

Sesshoumaru is a wise boy!  I like how he takes care of Kagome and the compromises he is willing to take for her.  I'm glad that Kagome is thinking of trusting him now.  Maybe she will tell him her name?  Can't wait for more!  Thanks for the new chapter!

That was a nice chapter.  I really am enjoying your portrayal of the principal characters in the story as well - so many have made Sesshoumaru almost bi-polar in personality, and that always disturbs me. It just doesn't sit right.  Thanks for another lovely installment!

Amber

soo...i loved it :)....pls continue to update....maybe like a 4 chapter update o:) llloooovvvveeee iiiitttt..

haha nice ending lines. poor kagome.

:) I want another chapter please!

Hmm... the mother doesn't sound like a total bitch... I wonder how she and Kagome will further interact...  *^_^*  I'm not suprised Hisoka-sensei was recognized as the best original character!  Only 17 drabbles in and I love the guy!  XP

Nice warning to Kagome.  I'm glad that Sesshoumaru's mother cares enough about him to be careful about the human he brought home.  She trusts him enough to let him keep Kagome, but she is going to make sure he doesn't get hurt.  Very nice update!

I really am loving this story, just as I've loved every one of your stories that I've read. Your talent is spectacular. Your works are inspiring. I'll keep reading, you keep writing!

It amused me that Sesshoumaru admired Kagome "lying without lying". Although I think of him as an honourable person, I can definitely envision Sesshoumaru being very clever in doling out bits and pieces of truth. After all, knowledge is power :P You capture him so completely-I can't believe how well you portray his character. It's like you have a mini Sesshoumaru hidden away who you use to gain insight on how he would react :P

Wow THANK YOU for the quick update!  I love this chapter I think that Sesshoumaru is slowly becoming enamored with her.  I think that her aloofness to answers is drawing him in like a flame to the moth.  Maybe thats why he never is with a female because she captured his attention in his early years and he has found none that appealed to him like she did or is going to!!!  Just a thought since he is never with anyone in the manga. 

Awww, Sesshomaru learns the joys of 'fudging' the truth.

I don't blame Sesshoumaru for being upset.  How can he understand about Kagome not giving him her name?  After everything he has done for her, sacrificed for her, she won't give him that one simple thing.  If only she would tell him that she doesn't want to change the future.  Nice update.

LOL!  Trust Sesshoumaru to be impressed with a half-truth.  Loved it.

Amber

please updata